Foolishness

Payton and I enjoying the god given treasures of Love,Life,Laughter and family

 

Drink to mans lofty hopes my friend

think of ourselves as something great

Where we pretend starvation’s end

as beauties walk and watch our gait

 

Fill the glass and drink your repose

we were both good sinners as well

Living our lives as we suppose

one foot in Heaven, one in Hell

 

Wine is better for us than bran

it takes the bitter from the scorn

With each drink grows a bigger man

each bottle downed and one is born

 

We tipped the glass to innocence

as the light reflected each face

Circling embers in suspense

around the campfires of our race

 

So take the cheer and fill it up

as masters of the universe

And think it not on empty cup

nor to brothers with empty purse

 

May god forgive our foolishness

we talked of many things that night

But what we lacked was loves caress

and cheer of child within our sight

 

Thinking we were not life’s keeper

we never worried on their end

For why would we fear the Reaper

nor did we help a single friend

 

Don't wait till your life is all done

to learn the lessons of a fool

Know the rewards of self are none

where love of others is the rule

 

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Author's Note

Why is it we strive for power over everything and everyone? Only to find in later life that we wasted much of our time feeding our vanity instead of our friends. May we all strive to know the feeling of love of ones nature instead of admiration and fear of ones finances. It is the love of your nature that will fill the hearts of others when they think of you. Those same people will always wish for your company and treasure your blessings upon them and theirs.

Reviews

[roarke]

Great write. Great picture. Just remember, some never find it and other's don't live long enough to use it. This is a difficult write, and you've tackled it here with seasoned wisdom and deft prose. I think this is one of your best pieces. And most meaningful.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Roarke it is always best to take ones virility with a little humility and the responsibility for others is where that comes to fruition

[Kaylor Mason]

The sheer truth of this poem stabs to the heart of everyone in the world. Nice work!

[AlieahRose]

THIS IS SO TRUE...
I LOVE WHEN WRITTERS DO THAT...
WRITE THE TRUTH...
YOU DO IT CONSISTANTLY...
AND IT IS SO GREAT...
THAT SECOND STANZA...
GAVE ME CHILLS...

[G. K. Bostic]

Oh, and I forgot to say, I love the picture you chose to use with this poem. It's wonderful!

[G. K. Bostic]

Insightful and so well told. I love the lines:
'But what we lacked was loves caress
and cheer of child within our sight'
And of course, the last two lines, true wisdom.
Well done Tate!!

[George Love]

This wasa very good, very insightful and very easy to read. Excellent work, and a wealth of wisdom if one were to dare to take it to heart. Well done!

[sarah]

I love the rhythm and the flow and the rhyming wonderful job

[Stacey]

This verse is fabulous and I LOVE the music selection!!! One foot in hell and the other in heaven...no one is innocent. I just hope that whatever table I sit there are a few that know I did them well. All one can do is try, make an attempt to be the best they can be each day. A choice we make each morning...Life is all about choice. Wonderful write, joy to read...and wow at the beautiful message in verse.

[Tommy]

Great words of wisdom, which hit too close to home!

RLG,
Tommy

[Erotic Goddess]

Don't wait till your life is all done

to learn the lessons of a fool

Know the rewards of self are none

where love of others is the rule

What a powerful ending to this piece that was stunning to read. This was wonderful, thank you for sharing this.

xxoxx

[KAREN]

Anoter wonderful write! Powerful! Deep! AND EXCELLENT as usual!