Foolishness

Payton and I enjoying the god given treasures of Love,Life,Laughter and family

 

Drink to mans lofty hopes my friend

think of ourselves as something great

Where we pretend starvation’s end

as beauties walk and watch our gait

 

Fill the glass and drink your repose

we were both good sinners as well

Living our lives as we suppose

one foot in Heaven, one in Hell

 

Wine is better for us than bran

it takes the bitter from the scorn

With each drink grows a bigger man

each bottle downed and one is born

 

We tipped the glass to innocence

as the light reflected each face

Circling embers in suspense

around the campfires of our race

 

So take the cheer and fill it up

as masters of the universe

And think it not on empty cup

nor to brothers with empty purse

 

May god forgive our foolishness

we talked of many things that night

But what we lacked was loves caress

and cheer of child within our sight

 

Thinking we were not life’s keeper

we never worried on their end

For why would we fear the Reaper

nor did we help a single friend

 

Don't wait till your life is all done

to learn the lessons of a fool

Know the rewards of self are none

where love of others is the rule

 

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Author's Note

Why is it we strive for power over everything and everyone? Only to find in later life that we wasted much of our time feeding our vanity instead of our friends. May we all strive to know the feeling of love of ones nature instead of admiration and fear of ones finances. It is the love of your nature that will fill the hearts of others when they think of you. Those same people will always wish for your company and treasure your blessings upon them and theirs.

Reviews

[roarke]

Great write. Great picture. Just remember, some never find it and other's don't live long enough to use it. This is a difficult write, and you've tackled it here with seasoned wisdom and deft prose. I think this is one of your best pieces. And most meaningful.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Roarke it is always best to take ones virility with a little humility and the responsibility for others is where that comes to fruition

[Anatomical Grip]

very poetic, very strong...quite nice

[Jeff]

Incredibly well written piece.

[Richard Williams]

Well said, your comment is poetic also. It is all skillfully penned, my favorite line is, "around the campfires of our race." Nice job.

[Tina Kline]

You ask a good question. It seems it takes a just about a life time to learn this and
someone telling us never seems to work, we don't learn until a lot of time and
living has gone by. Another outstanding write!

[EMP]

i really enjoyed this, it was light keeping the reader engaged but with a deeper meaning for us to think about. well done, brilliant piece.

[D1218]

That was great :) Very deep

[Frank F. Atanacio]

another very well written piece :)

[Jeff Bresee]

Wow, this is a great one Tate... love it.

[Barry S. Maltese]

I like the view you took in this piece of writing - that of the pub dweller who washes away reality with each chug of brew, or spirits. Nicely done. I could easily envision the men and women raising their glasses.

[Nimbus Thread]

Well observed and penned. Sometimes we have to make the mistakes to realise what we've done. : )