The Long and Winding Road

Emotion so bare and open fearing no more of the night Said come back again and again stay with me till morning light

Rebecca

Oh so fragrant the air was tasted

when first our souls did meet

Wafting on to the fading night

spoke of smells so ever sweet

 

Emotions so bare and open

fearing no more of the night

Say come back again and again

stay with me till morning light

 

Thirst overpowers my senses

with promises of love each day

Saying to drink of your fountain

swearing you'll show me the way

 

So short the time we have to be

oh what shall I do with mine

Give of my heart to another

or simply drink of the wine

 

I'll trust in you my happiness

life seldom gives but just one turn

while knowing so well the danger

I still wish to live, love and learn

 

Tate

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Author's Note

Sometimes love is in the first sight! This was written for Rebecca. Seldom do the paths of dreams and reality meet .Rebecca is one of those.

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

I really enjoy the way you twist your words.. I love the smooth elegant flow to this, it just rolls off your tongue and fills your mouth with a flavor so irresistible it can not be mistaken. You always capture the mood perfectly, not sure if its the words, the music, or the image, or all three combined to make us readers fall in love with your work.. Really nice work!

[EMP]

such an overwhelmingly good poem. brilliant emotion created, you can really engage the reader and make them feel what the voice of the poem is feeling. amazing, well done. 100/100

[Tony]

Both thought provoking and passionate in it's essence.
A raw and evocative write which builds up to a powerful and moving climax.
Highly enjoyable read.

[J. R.]

This is a poem of magnificent beauty and genuine emotion. It paints a vivid portrait with elegant language and was a real treat to read.

[sorellaflowers]

Great job! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!

[BLACKCRUSH]

Yeah I have to say that I do believe it can happen. I liked this piece becuse love is abou putting your feelings out to another person and taking a leap of faith. I think you coveyed alot about love in this write. Lovely write.

[Angel's Lady]

*swoons* The woman in your life must walk on air...

And this song is one of my absolute most favorite ever....

[sarah]

This is so beautiful it paints a wonderful picture and the message is indeed true! great write

[Amanda]

This was a magnificent poem. Many kudos!

[Loner]

How true i agree with you. A great poem , a heartfelt poem.