The Long and Winding Road

Emotion so bare and open fearing no more of the night Said come back again and again stay with me till morning light

Rebecca

Oh so fragrant the air was tasted

when first our souls did meet

Wafting on to the fading night

spoke of smells so ever sweet

 

Emotions so bare and open

fearing no more of the night

Say come back again and again

stay with me till morning light

 

Thirst overpowers my senses

with promises of love each day

Saying to drink of your fountain

swearing you'll show me the way

 

So short the time we have to be

oh what shall I do with mine

Give of my heart to another

or simply drink of the wine

 

I'll trust in you my happiness

life seldom gives but just one turn

while knowing so well the danger

I still wish to live, love and learn

 

Tate

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Author's Note

Sometimes love is in the first sight! This was written for Rebecca. Seldom do the paths of dreams and reality meet .Rebecca is one of those.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

This displays a lot of longing and passion. Nicely done!

[Aggie Skeleton]

This is probally my favorite of yours, it's impossible to forget and really touches the heart.

[Scarlet Pulse]

This poem is Unforgettable Tate! Amazing! This poem will do wonders for people who read it! It did for me!

[JulieNorell]

This is SO beautiful! Makes me want to cry and get all mushy :)

[Magdelena]

OMG! The tears.. This is so beautiful.. This piece makes one want to go out and find that one special love, dance in the moonlight, bask under the bright stars and just sit and dream.. Oh the wonder of it! Sighhhhhh.

Mags xx

[Shelly Braen]

So very touching and beautiful. The golden tendrils of the eye's passion are truely unforgetable. How lovely and remarkable you capture a single moment. So much to be felt at first glance.

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing poem

[Jazique]

Nice very nice. I esp. loved the last line. keep us the awesome work.

[Mauricio Montoya]

I've had A few of those myself, nice work.

[Champagne]

Beautiful and passionate. I loved the intensity with which the offering of love is made here. There is an unknown mystery all around, and yet we see the familiar, the losing of the heart that we all have felt at some point in life.

Very touching!