The Sweetest Gift

My loving wife "Rebecca"

We the frail likes of which

have never known so sweet

Do love each others heart alone

in secret places that we meet

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We touch each of the other

in the dusk pearl of the spring

Hold the light of love's embrace

as both our hearts take wing

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Caught in the web of years

that binds our lives so tight

Giving all to each desires dreams

for the hopes to love's delight

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Never was there a mood of mine

lost in the love song of embrace

That you gave my soul to sing

in wonders lit by our secret place

 ____________________________

Think I must have eyes to see

this heart so unknown till now

Opened the light of imprisoned love

that hung on the weighted bough

_____________________________

Where dark the days of my past

now lit by the bright sunshine

I give the world another look

to see its sweet gift as mine

 

 

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Author's Note

This was just a wandering thought I had while thinking on my wife.

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Heart felt words in thoughts lost in a unconditional, irrevocable love.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very nice, the metered nature of the poem is practically perfect. Each quatrain is nicely measured and excellent to sound out. Very cool picture and awesome sentiments throughout.

[Emunah June.]

Wow. What a way to wrap the reader in the moment!! You are incredible!

[Aggie Skeleton]

So sweet......sniff sniff.

[smile]

Morgon your poems will make me fall in love with you.You write exceptionally good.It is really touchy and I AM TOUCHED.

[Anatomical Grip]

that is the sweetest thing....

[Abhinav]

I also loved your choice of words, and even the picture, for some strange reason.
but a beautiful poem. great work

[msharma]

The bond seems a great strength live it up

[kaylynnmelody♥]

I love your choice of words, I had to actually read this peice twice to get the true feeling of this poem, It was loving and sweet. thanks for sharing.

[Stacey]

I do LOVE your song selections with verse!!! And my wish for ALL is the hope of delight, that all finding that secret place where they may find and spread wings to soar heights unknown. It's such an amazing feeling. The opportunity is there...just open your heart and embrace each breath taking moment. It will change your world. Wonderful write:)