Worthy of My Friends

Through path and switch with company skipping along the winding road I pass food and accompany with he whom life seldom bestowed

Dave and Jason

To walk the roads of soul strewn streets

with all thoughts we know of living

Leaves us lonesome for others feats

finds sharing to come from giving

 

Through path with switch and company

skipping along the winding road

I pass food and accompany

with he whom life seldom bestowed

 

In those who share my few comforts

won't you join me in life's amends

For as long as I walk this earth

may I be worthy of my friends

Reviews

[BlueEyedBandit]

I really enjoyed this and the message it sends.

[Jeff Bresee]

Wow, another powerful one. Nice to be back where I can be in the read.

[PadfootBlack]

Everyone loves this, and rightfully so. Fantastically written, and beautiful. Super job, my friend.

[Wandering Nomad]

Beautifully written, as usual. It makes me value friendship even more. :)

[Kasey Jones]

There's a great message in this piece. It flows beautifully and you say so much with so few words. Great song to go with it.

[fireblossom]

Why does it take years to get to the place we were told by wises ones we should be?

Unselfish love shown to others is beautiful. Your poem well expresses this state or being. Well written.

[KatiePie]

The way this ended just made me go "Awww". I loved this! Reading it and experiencing the emotions that lay behind your words was an adventure I'm so happy I took, really this just brought a smile to my face, and I thank you or that. Great write!
-Cathrine

[Frantzuu]

This is a beautiful piece of art, they're more than just words. I see the colors of life, the importance of friendship come out in this piece of writing. Stunning like always!!

[Halkhend]

Thhis is really good I dont quite catch the meaning butthe song that you put to this really does help the reader pace his/herself to read as how I wold asume is the pace you read it. but it really is good

[Seashell]

Well I am a friend for life.....so you're stuck with me my friend.

Lovely piece here Tate...
Thanks for taking the time (and I know it's a difficult one) to share.
God Bless you and your family.

Babs xx