Worthy of My Friends

Through path and switch with company skipping along the winding road I pass food and accompany with he whom life seldom bestowed

Dave and Jason

To walk the roads of soul strewn streets

with all thoughts we know of living

Leaves us lonesome for others feats

finds sharing to come from giving

 

Through path with switch and company

skipping along the winding road

I pass food and accompany

with he whom life seldom bestowed

 

In those who share my few comforts

won't you join me in life's amends

For as long as I walk this earth

may I be worthy of my friends

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

You never fail to open eyes with honest thoughts and sincere emotions Tate, excellent poem my friend.

[Sujash I. Purna]

excellent work here Tate!

[Shelly Braen]

The true meaning of knowing one another. I find this profound, and soulful. 'Soul strewn streets' is a phrase that I consider the most beautiful, for many walk, seeing people as objects, never once attempting to feel the numerous heart beats around. How gorgeous is it to treasure friends so strongly. You sir, are magnificent!

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Yes, as we get older we have learned not to be so selfish, and we tend to give, to help more freely. Life is to be shared and enjoyed.
Really loved this one Tate, we should all learn to share and love and give more.
Wonderful poem

[Quinn Blackburn]

Love that closing Tate, wonderful wordcrafting. Oddly enough I kinda say the same thing about my dogs, lol, may I be worthy of the love and praise they silently heap upon me every day :o) Giving of ourselves is never really effortless, but then nothing worthwhile ever does come easy. Oh so worth every effort though!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is wonderfully inspirational and speaks of the fine person you are Tate. Loved this

[George Love]

A very strong message in few words. The flow and beat of thsi work is excellent, the advice second to none. This is something we should all work towards, and be a shining example to our children as well. Great stuff!

[EmpressPoetess]

another great write devoted to friendship

[Helen Woodward]

A beautifully structured piece of writing with a true message that screams to be heard. May we all be worthy of those who are true friends...
Your phrasing is wonderful Tate and much thought has gone into the writing of this.
Enjoyed the lesson!