Worthy of My Friends

Through path and switch with company skipping along the winding road I pass food and accompany with he whom life seldom bestowed

Dave and Jason

To walk the roads of soul strewn streets

with all thoughts we know of living

Leaves us lonesome for others feats

finds sharing to come from giving

 

Through path with switch and company

skipping along the winding road

I pass food and accompany

with he whom life seldom bestowed

 

In those who share my few comforts

won't you join me in life's amends

For as long as I walk this earth

may I be worthy of my friends

Reviews

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

I'm speechless. You have a very kind,compassionate heart!

[Jane Doe]

coolio its intresting to read you peices some not as intresting but still intriguing

[wolfshrew]

the short sentimental bursts of writing that you provide prove over and over to be of quality when i read through them, i appreciate them.

[Awdures]

I'm beginning to think you are an apostle and your message is given to us through the medium of poetry! Another amazing poem, a powerful and heart warming message. We all wish to be people that others turn to for advice, and a shoulder to cry on.

[zombiikillah666]

so very wonderful. (:

[Raivenne]

Excellent reminder that it's time for me to reach out to a few people and let them know just how much their friendship means to me.

[Carolina Kel]

Interesting read. Perhaps something people don't think about enough, unless it concerns their significant other. I often wonder how I'm good enough for my fiance and I don't often think about how I'm good enough for those I call my closest friends. I should.
Good job here.

[StacyPerry]

Once more the music matches up very nicely with the poetry. Very nice piece.

[Amber Elaine Marshall]

I love it! I myself try to be a person worthy of this world and I give far more than I get in return but it's ok I'm a better person but I can identify with the words in your writing it's just a shame more people don't do the same. A nice write.

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You astonish me, the way you can convey what you are trying to say in such a short yet meaningfull few paragraphs. Amazing.