Queen of the Night

Look to the moon queen of night

she causes the ocean to attend her

And he so long as she is in sight

has full tide to kiss her tender

 

When she at last turns off her light

he calls the mighty waves to moan

With low ebb manifests his sorrow

heaving the fathoms with every groan

 

So you the keeper of my heart beat

have my joys attending your will

Lifting the weight so high and so deep

causing loves every wave to fill

 

When you are gone away from me

 as you sometimes are known to depart

Causes my very soul to ache

waves of sorrow flow from my heart

 

So like the ebb and flow of tide

life's joys and sorrows surrender

To the never ending song of love

we both give as much as we render

 

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Reviews

[Halkhend]

I love this the full time I was reading I could just here the ocean not yyou best but it is very good :)

[A.r. Bazian]

ok, the relation to the sea is amazing, the ideas and imageries presented in this piece are very appealing to me, and are pretty strong!
i would say this isn't exactly your best piece, in my point of view, i've read much better work by you, but here's the trick, even this is nice, so nice!
you write good! so good... that even the weakest of your work (in my opinion) remains profound still!

[Katie L]

i love this poem.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

I adore the dichotomy expressed in this work. The power of La Lune on the sea, its frequency and how it relates to the emotions of a relationship. Nicely done. Truly enjoyable and very romantic. Thanks for sharing.
Love and Light,
Siddartha

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was primal and soothing, loving the wash of the ocean heartbeat in the words.

[S.W.]

Really loved this poem. i love all stuff to do with the moon and night time. it makes everything seem more passionate.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Wow have never read a poem about the moon in such words and about the soul i can hear the words that they say and it is peaceful.

[Adora.xo]

Awwwww this made me "awe"! So cute, so true and so pure. The diction was elegant and filled with emotion, and the love behind each word was breath-taking! Brilliant, Brilliant job!

~Adora

[Seashell]

I love this to bits !! I can't tell you how much it touched my soul Tate, purely and simply because of the way it was written of course. The choice of words, the way one could compare it to a human relationship is just awesome.

Thank you for share

Babs xxx

[WriterSki7]

A most enchanting poem.
I think you mgiht have once been a sailor.
ABCB, good Rhyme; as usual.
Definitely well done.