Queen of the Night

Look to the moon queen of night

she causes the ocean to attend her

And he so long as she is in sight

has full tide to kiss her tender

 

When she at last turns off her light

he calls the mighty waves to moan

With low ebb manifests his sorrow

heaving the fathoms with every groan

 

So you the keeper of my heart beat

have my joys attending your will

Lifting the weight so high and so deep

causing loves every wave to fill

 

When you are gone away from me

 as you sometimes are known to depart

Causes my very soul to ache

waves of sorrow flow from my heart

 

So like the ebb and flow of tide

life's joys and sorrows surrender

To the never ending song of love

we both give as much as we render

 

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Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

Well done Indeed Tate your comparison is spot on

[Desert Dreamer]

I love the way you have personified the moon and the ocean, and compared this relationship to that of love. Your picture choice is well made and your poem is well written. Thanks for sharing.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

like the tides~ your poem has a gorgeous ebb and flow~

[sharonlee]

Deep and powerful write rich with imagery...pleaure to read...

[Julijana Velichkovska]

So you the keeper of my heart beat
have my joys attending your will... my favorites! Beautiful and deep as the ocean it self!

[LadyNaida]

Wow, this is so beautiful. I thought of a rendevous with the Moon and the Sun, love that can not happen.

[A Wanderer of Dreams]

That was so beautiful it has to be one of my favorites so far :)

[_thesovo]

This is so sweet. Ahaha. :)

[Anonymous]

Breathtaking.

[Antonio Valentino]

Enjoying your pen young man...

Great write, keep it up.
Antonio