Days to Remember

Build your dreams with greatest care Don’t think on lives great sorrowed past Create a world so wondrous That through ice and fire it will last

Tatertot and I sharing a life lesson

We are architects of our fate

working within constraints of time

Some mens lives do seem so blessed

while others seem riddled with crime

 

For each of us stack stones of life

from our yesterdays we borrow

The blocks from which we build our days

are foundations for tomorrow

 

Build your dreams with greatest care

don't think on life's great sorrowed past

Create a world so wondrous

that through ice and fire it will last

 

Your child’s future held in your hands

go from failures cold darkened din

Show your son where you are going

not the tale of where you have been

Author's Note

Be the beacon your child uses to light his way!
Not the darkened night he shuns!

Reviews

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

very well said i like this very Lovely Piece

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Miraculous ending. Love this one - succinct and morally outstanding! Thank you, just, thank you!
Light,
Siddartha

[EMW]

I agree. We need to be a great example for we can make sure we lead them down the correct path.

[Ishgnu]

*sigh* Beautiful. You just say it all so so well.

[Ebb and Flow]

Tate as always I truely admire your way with words.

[Truly Ross-Wisehart]

"Show your son where you are going, not the tale of where you have been"

Truly words to live by! I loved this and the voice of Natalie Merchant only serves to put a fine point on an already beautiful work. Well done.

~True

[Seashell]

This is just the best Tate.

Thanks

Babsie xxx

[Lena M. P.]

Very intense, with powerful advice. Bonding with your child, guiding and mentoring to aid him in his own forming.

[A.r. Bazian]

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i have nothing to say!