Ode to Her

The fruits loins I would not know

 

 

Fruits of loins I might never know

had we never loved so sweet

When we did plant seeds of desire

little chancing we might meet

 

Holding my breath as I jumped

chancing all on a single toss

Leaped the very bonds of Earth

trying for the worlds I would cross

 

But God did see my grasp inflated

as he pulled me back to Earth

Saying of my tenacity

"you have overstepped your worth"

 

Filled with confidence I did go

not caring what he had said

For I would listen to no one

as I had no fear nor dread

 

Now holding to that grasp of faith

it's for you I shed my tears

Knowing you alone were worthy

of loving all of my years

 

Author's Note

A dream that once was an obsession! The only one that got away.

Reviews

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

thank you for your Reviews also and posting this song also it Inspired me to write some thing some thing happened today between my husband and i so we are taking a breather to calm down we have come this far our Anniversary is this month April 8th will be 10 yrs of marriage. Thank you again

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

little confusing sounds like my dreams i have that dont mean any thing cause some of em dont make any Sense and some do cause a dream can just be a dream at times. but was a Interesting write nice work

have You ever dreamed of writing a poem saw what it was then write it down just wondering ? it happened to me i saw myself siting on my bed and writing on a note book. Nice write

[Liz Alexander]

You convey a dream into this poem. Playing out a story line. Well Done Great job

[deeps]

This is quite the wonderful write here.
I enjoyed this write.

[Prateeksha Khot]

Great conversion of a dream into a poem. Beautiful choice of words and amazing flow. Well done !

[LonelySoul]

a leap of love will also test your faith as much as testing your will,
but the leap of faith is the hope and the testing of love inside your soul...

[Dimples87]

Wow, you definitely built up the intensity of this piece. The depth of it kept the reader glued to the page, following your every emotion and feeling. I really enjoyed this poem because of all it is and the lust-filled passion that our dreams hold.

[Lilly]

Great poem and very well written