Sunshine

Now my pains have no place to play And nothing left for them to do

Rebecca 

 

You consoled my worn soul

 lifting me to my feet

A noble heart of kindness

dealt Purgatory defeat

I found the nightmares fading

 as the new thoughts took their place

Washing out the poison 

that so long had filled that space

 

That smile faded my sadness

 with sweet thoughts I had of you

As pains found no place to play

and nothing for them to do

 

Author's Note

Her spark for life lit the fire in my mind.

Reviews

[poetic soul]

Taking away poison ideas

its such a wow effect in life!!!
lovely picture!!!
shows the warmth people crave....God Bless!!!
and the poem was gr8....justified the picture....loved it...

:) Love,
Krishna

[The Last Poetic King]

This was a heart-warming piece. I enjoyed it, good work here.

[Katie]

You and your wife are two very lucky people. You both have found the most rare thing everyone in life is searching for; love. This intimate write is so touching and heart felt. Amazing!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh the two of you look so happy and nice together.. I am so happy for you both! I loved the feelings and flow of this one.. the music made it feel so serene. The essence gave the deep and sincere impression of one ready to settle in.. cleansing away old poisons.. and seeing life in a brand new way. Love can lift us higher.. here you have shown that beautifully! Awesome job!

[Ecros Lathes]

I am really moved by your poem tears came I am sorry.

[George Love]

Nice work, a definite tribute to your soulmate!

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

You both Are a lovely couple. beautiful write

[Janet Spigos]

Wow. If that is you and your new love in the photo, then I am happy for you. Take good care and enjoy the sunshine.
xo,
Janet

[John A Common]

It captures how I feel about my own wife perfectly. A wonderfull poem.

[Poeticpiers]

After many years of anguish and sew few years alone I too found my alter ego.
She certainly seems to be just what you needed. Your poetry reflects your happiness ivor