Sunshine

Now my pains have no place to play And nothing left for them to do

Rebecca 

 

You consoled my worn soul

 lifting me to my feet

A noble heart of kindness

dealt Purgatory defeat

I found the nightmares fading

 as the new thoughts took their place

Washing out the poison 

that so long had filled that space

 

That smile faded my sadness

 with sweet thoughts I had of you

As pains found no place to play

and nothing for them to do

 

Author's Note

Her spark for life lit the fire in my mind.

Reviews

[Lorry]

Beautiful words Tate, to remind us all that we just never know the minute fate gives us a break and points us in the right direction and where we will find the people who can take us where we need to be.
A fitting tribute for any day, but especially today :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Lorry I am fortunate to have the girl I love

[Relic]

A perfect poem for valentine's day, Tate. You express your feelings in a way I never could.

Great writing.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you relic it is also my 8th anniversary today.

[Lovecraft]

Wow, a beautiful and tender love poem. I'm very impressed with this. An inspiring ode to unconditional Love...

Very well done, Tate. :)

[Tate Morgan]

Lovecraft I am so sorry some how i missed this review I thank you I didnt do it on purpose thank you

[Einstein Noodle]

when a man finds vulnerability and lets go all the lies he thought were true .... the leading astray is gone and if that miracle happens he finds his home sweet home ... a lock and key fit never shaken :) love the poem ..love the pic ..and love the music ..all good for me ..reminds me of my thankfulness for sweetest Norma! :))
E.

[Tate Morgan]

If ever a man needed saving it was me and Becky was that SALVATION for which i grant my undying devotion till the grave.thank you

[Einstein Noodle]

i hear you bro! loud and clear! :) safety and healing in those nestling arms ..

[Tate Morgan]

I am lucky i dont need to learn the same lessons over and over I realize my fortune and will guard her with my life

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...............

[Tate Morgan]

A smart man learns from his mistakes but a wise man will learn from yours

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks for the chuckle this morning Tate! i am putting that one in my noodle keeper box

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you gene

[Poetic champion composi..]

very nice............................................

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you very much

[Deborah Brooks-Langford]

ahhh this is so nice... its nice to have some one so deeply and accept you just the way you are.. nicely done Tate.. and Merry Christmas

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you merry christmas deb

[timthy]

Great piece Tate! As always , you deliver and speak words as if they were plucked from my own mind!

[Tate Morgan]

many thanks Tim I am not good enough to deserve her but she is obviously blind I can take that lol

[A Soap Mess Stories]

such a sweet poem...so full of love....

[Tate Morgan]

thank you she is the light of my life

[Mary C]

great feel / tone to this piece....nice work....Well crafted - solid penning

[Tate Morgan]

Thanks Mary This one was easy to write as are most of the ones for my wi
fe they seem to write themselves

[WE]

perfection in words and music

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you gracie I find it easy to write about her In her i see no failings

[WE]

yes that is called true love

[Tate Morgan]

Shes a peach