Not Forgotten

 

I thought I had forgotten

what with spring came back to me

Words un-uttered thoughts we stirred

of the way things use to be

 

I remember the dark door

where we hid from all the rain

A dry respite from the storm

safe in arms I'd felt no pain

 

I went back to the small doorway

where happily our loves had played

My heart ached for what could have been

if behind that door we had stayed

 

With wild, spring, rain and thunder

something wondrous comes this way

Your eyes had said more that night

than your lips could ever say

 

Author's Note

Sometimes the thoughts of the mind take me back to times that seem like yesterday. However the day has set on those times and the new day risen on better ones.
This is a poem set to a 7 syllable count in the meter. It has a simple A.B.C.B. rhyme scheme. The 2nd line of each quatrain rhymes with the 4th.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW Tater Tot... This has left me breathless!
I am truly surprised by the passion in your words! OH MY! :D
Now this is worth reading over and over again, it makes the heart race...such palpable yearning etched between the lines...Lovely write!~xoxo~:)

[Tate Morgan]

Truly this is as good as my romantic heart can get

[Barbz]

Why is someone else using my pic? Barbz......not my review

[Tate Morgan]

Your humor is showing today barbz

[Barbz]

Sorry about this Tate, I wasn't trying to be humorous, merely curious. I went to this site to read this work last nite and tried to review it , but wasn't able. I scrolled down and saw my pic and a review.....however their was a different name under my pic with a review that I didn't write. I see that it's gone this morn....some sort of a snag, I assume........Barbz

[Barbz]

Just noticed, it was LadyAnn68....her pic is on it now. Glitch! Not a problem...

[Tate Morgan]

we do have gliches here like that

[joshua deathdealer]

This brought tears to my eyes. The passion and heartfelt visuals here are wonderful.. (:

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I went back to the small doorway
where happily our loves had played
My heart ached for what could have been
if behind that door we had stayed
.....................You have written the real thing. Everybody is having such sheerful experience in their life. Good write. My best wishes.

[MOON]

Lovely rendition of a moment lost and the if onlys...

[Irena]

beautiful piece of poetry! i especially love the line "with wild, spring, rain and thunder something wondrous comes this way" i am now going to read it again... great!

[impuls]

I ended up reading this over several times. It's a very evocative piece. Beautifully done.

[LadyNaida]

This is beautiful! Reminds me of an experience my cousin shared with someone she loved deeply.

[Shelly Braen]

So beautiful and profound! It was like swimming through a sea of Amber stones and blue satin.

[Always&Forever]

wow this is really amazing!

[quinfinn]

very lovely emotional piece.

[?]

This so moved my heart, stirred my emotions. Very beautiful and passionate.
But so soft and warm though. Flow was great.
Loved it