The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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Aris
"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[msharma]

Great daddy's efforts. Poem is lyrical as well as full of imagery.

[goltinfron_nh]

This girl is lucky to have such a father like you.

[Cynthia]

That's a lovely writng!

[Jasmine]

This is lovely... very heartfelt. Your daughter is very lucky to have such a creative father as you!

[Geralyn Miller]

What a lovely gift for a beloved daughter. She is a lucky young lady. You have set the bar very high for the gentlemen who will come to love her. Even bets, one day you will be a totally besotted Grandpa.

[QC]

This is absolutely beautiful! So much emotion; when I was reading it I had one of those heartclentch moments....you know the kind where it feels like your heart is too big for your chest?outstanding!

[Cherrie Palmer]

wonderful piece it is just beautiful.

[Alex W]

That's very very good, I really like it :-)

I hope your daughter liked it too.

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

A person's parents are often the most important person's in a beings life. The roots of a now full grown tree give their final advice. Warm words that should be cherished!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i love this poem.. no matter what you do to it