The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Excellant poem. I like the rhythmic words. It tells about the real and sweet thoughts of the poet. Best wishes to your daughter. lovely moments you shared with us. with regards.

[Dushyant Thadani]

This is such a sweet and beautiful poem. I just love everything about it. Its just AMAZING.

[Lori P.]

Another touch my heart writing. The song is perfect with this.

[Me]

simply brilliant...amazing rhythm

[Crow]

Magnificent, the words flow and are full of love and truth. Excellent imagery, truly from the heart.

[NewYorkNights]

Oh my gosh, this is beautiful! I honestly cannot get enough of your work!

[LadyNaida]

Aw, this is so beautiful and so heartfelt.

[Jess Quna]

great poem... well, it's more than just a poem, I can tell but I don't know how else to call it ^^
greetings

[sweta'karman']

amazing tate,it is like a an effusion of fatherhood filled fith love,care,protection,affection .Blessed is the reciever....

[STAR CHILD]

this is better but still not quite fit with what i want