The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[Brave girl]

it's so sweet,she's lucky to have you

[Green]

This is so sweet! It may have just been me, but I felt like there was a little sadness at seeing her go even though you were willing to do so.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Aww this is so sweet.

[The Nameless]

I'm sure she found this a wonderful gift and is proud to be your daughter.
The pictures are really beautiful.
And so is the poem =D

[Carolann Dowsett]

What a beautiful gift of love for your little girl. I bet she treasures this so much. Another amazing write.

[light and ashes]

Awe :) I love this so much. The last two stanzas are my favorite part. I love the comparison of the tree and the roots, absolutely stunning poetry, 100.

[Harmony Babin]

Awwe, I love it, its so sweet and touching. Love the song too!

[Jadey]

This one strike strong, wow! You touched the deepest part of me as daughter of my father.

No matter what you choose to be,
You will always be a part of me.

Excellent! Thanks for sharing.

[joshua deathdealer]

awww is right. This is so sweet.. She is lucky to have a father such as yourself. Excellent.