Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...
Beautiful... What else is there to say... :) (Bit small my I managed it) Thanks my friend
Posted 11 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you I am sorry it took so long to reply to this i got carried away with other things and forgo.. read moreThank you I am sorry it took so long to reply to this i got carried away with other things and forgot Thank you
What a gift, so many people take for granted a parents love…it’s not a preexisting quality that everyone has…it takes an incredible heart to love someone more than everything else…more than the naughtiness and disappointing moments…more than everything. It is always such a beautiful thing to witness. Hats off to you! This is beautiful and I can only imagine how happy it made her!!!!
Your daughter is blessed to have a father who not only feels this way, but who expresses these feelings so beautifully. I especially love the last stanza - read it a few times; it could stand alone, with its sweet message and tree imagery!
I've read this poem several times now and I am always stunned by its beauty. Such a wonderful tribute to your daughter. Every line holds precious imagery. So well done, Tate.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
hi you know i too feel that way about it it just seems to have captured some kind of magic that here.. read morehi you know i too feel that way about it it just seems to have captured some kind of magic that here to fore i never had Thank you
awe this surely is a most stunning poem to your daughter, warm and very much heartfelt, thanks so mu.. read moreawe this surely is a most stunning poem to your daughter, warm and very much heartfelt, thanks so much for sharing xoxo
Blessed to have a great father like yourself to be an idol and a beacon of light in their darkest days...Well penned...
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Hi Sami I am very happy with the life and children the world has blessed me with. I'm not near as pr.. read moreHi Sami I am very happy with the life and children the world has blessed me with. I'm not near as proud of the father they were given lol
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