The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[TransparentHearts]

Astonishing! I love the metaphors of how you connected love with nature and intertwined the two subjects beautifully.

[Aradie Rain]

Beautiful, She's a lucky girl!
"Though seasons change, and leaves may die
They bloom each spring with new glow"
Genius, I love it
~Aradie

[Star Wolf]

This is very beautiful, tender and very loving. It should be in a book of love poems, I think.

[fallen angel]

I like this simple and sweet

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

A very positive and uplifting poem yes in the spring and summer of life we do indeed see the changes afoot which yield new blossom and new roots for all.
Life in a way measures up the same as in humanity we are of the same ilk one could say with definition,man chooses to separated with his artificial surroundings and existence but in reality he is much the same as if he were back in the jungle nurturing and protecting his young and never stop caring for her or his welfare.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Simplistic and VERY profound... Every tree has it's roots.. every house it's foundation. Here you profess to be the roots to what ever tree (mood and/or strength I found).. to support this other person unconditionally as they are a part of you so intensely. Some people can have such huge impacts in our lives.. lovely sentiment that could be to a really close friend, family member or lover! Great work!

[Babsie Bee]

A dream man methinks coming away with such beauty on paper..or screen !!
Babs xx

[They.Call.Me.Mo]

This is such a sweet poem. I feel as though can understand the relation :]

[Coyote Poetry]

A outstanding poem. You wrote with kindness and honest words. A pleasure to read. When we love someone. The memory can't be erased.
Coyote