The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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Aris
"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[Luna]

This is so adorable! I believe this is show everyone feels when someone they love grows up and leave. Very well written and I love the flow.

[LonelySoul]

this one feels just a tad un-finished,had me wanting more,
sometimes its so hard to let them go,but you know it is for the best...

[Havatara]

Aww! I could really tell that you love your daughter, and the message that I got from the poem is that you'll always support her as she grows because you love her? Something like that, but I'm not sure that that's what you were trying to say. Either way, it was an amazing poem.

[Rogelio Chavez]

I like this. It was beautiful. You are a talented poetic writer.

[Jeff Bresee]

Bingo. I think I like this one the best.....so far. Keep writing. You have a gift.

[The Wave]

I remember this poem!

You sent this to me in a message. I'm glad to see it's been posted.
Really amazing piece. :)

[Sean M. Addams]

a very amazing piece..loved detail in this piece alot...i'm sure she was very honored by this piece..nice work!!

[The Last Poetic King]

It's such a beautiful piece of work. I enjoyed it, and I hope some day I may write something this great for my own children.

[Nayan]

Truly loving poem! Ah! Ah! The lines are resonating again n again in my mind...
"You'll always be a part of me
I am the roots - you are the tree."

How do you write such touching and deep lines? I salute the poem, its meaning, and its creator!

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Oh ! I love this. I love the line For roots are so strong and never go. That is so true my friend and I love how you turned loving human emotion into a tree poem.