The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[Robin]

wonderful , she is lucky to have a father like you

[Aven]

this is beautiful, and the pictures awaken some of my own childhood memories... well written :)

[justice]

Amazingness. Simply, this is beauty. It is just perfect. Your daughter is one lucky girl. Thank you for sharing this with us here. All the best!
J
p.s. I love the music selections with your poems. Very smart!

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

This is so inspirational, and I'm sure your daughter loved it and treasures it. Wonderful piece!

[Ramiz Ilham Khan]

Loveliness unfurled with every word. Wonderful :-)

[Helen Woodward]

Stunning work Tate, I am completely bowled over by the content of your poem, the emotion of it and the presentation...EXCELLENT WORK!!!

[Poeticpiers]

Sometimes the graphics enhance the words I think achieved that ivor

[My Fair Lady]

Oh Tate, this is an absolutely gorgeous tribute to your little girl. No matter where she goes she will always be yours... so lovely. I have read that poem before.. I was suprised that I did not find a reveiw from myself here.

[Lilly]

I have read this before - but I don't remember it being displayed as it is now. It is such a lovely poem, and the symbol of a tree and roots for being connected and growing is perfect. A really beautiful gift to your daughter! I love it.

[Desert Dreamer]

The visuals are great here! Wonderful combination...it deserves framing, you must be a wonderful father.