A Day In The Life

 

 

Her life so far fulfilling and good.

Expecting nothing special this day.

Thinking he would be early not late.

She practiced what not to say.

 

The sound of the bell tolled the hour.

Or was it the door she'd heard?

Gathering her thoughts, feeling flushed.

She opened but said not a word.

 

So different so sweet, maybe divine?

She knew not what he could be.

Eye's so bright, his soul ablaze.

The deepest fires of man burned in He.

 

She drowns in his gentle eyes.

Got lost in the waves of blue.

Questions answered with a touch.

How he felt the same way too.

 

Who was this man here standing?

Why was it she was so entranced?

By the time that night had ended.

They'd laughed, cried and danced.

 

Whatever was the reason why?

She had felt her heart abloom.

She had never felt so intrigued.

As when he walked in the room.

 

So far unable to bare him going.

She wished he would fall asleep.

For all the tomorrows that follow.

She thought this soul she'd keep.

Tate

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Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Beautifully written! Love that picture, too.

[Tommy]

A tribute to love at first sight. You always write with such verve and love of the things of life. It chears the heart to read your pen.

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Helen Crutchett]

My opinion hasn't changed.....still adore this poem Tate.

[the_stoic]

ask a lover if he/she is willing to sacrifice all for that one moment of eternal bliss .. that one moment which makes a resounding connection between two souls .. that feeling .. a true lover's answer shall always be - YES !

the last stanza brilliantly depicted these emotions . great !

[Helen Crutchett]

Beautiful poem whereby you captured the very essence of
brand-new romance. It was a complete joy to read Tate....
thank you for requesting I read it. ~ Helena :)

[Dezarae]

Very nice, as i read i felt a sence of joy and a first lovers feelings of nervousness, fear, both overcome with what true love is. It was very nice, and if you dont mind i would like to copy that and send it to my fiancee?

[BABSIE BEE]

Love is a very powerful thing, taking over as we use our heart not head. Sometimes it's for the best. It makes us feel that we have the right and/or even ability to capture ones soul for ever and a day !! Very beautiful. Thanks for this share.
Babs xx

[Janet Spigos]

"Questions answered with a touch" - Lovely, like that perfect moment before the first kiss between lovers.
Your poem captures that indescribable feeling many have experienced, but few are able to hold on to.

[Poeticpiers]

sometimes when the chemistry is right the world goes into soft focus bar for that one person
Elegantly expressed