Oh yes! I wish I'd read this before because by now I'd have read it a dozen or more times - if you know what I mean!
Love the thought of never growing up, living in a world of sweet make-believe where life is jumping in puddles and thunder is only mischievous angels slamming Heaven's gates!
There's a sweet juxtaposition of thought in this : ' The wild west witch would love me. As she brewed her dinner of souls. I'd have all my fine clothing. Bright and shiny none with holes.'
I love the way you wrote this in the font and lines separating the stanzas. I also loved the rhyme and meter, it flowed. And very descriptive. However, I didn't like the song in the background, I thought it was distracting. Thanks for sharing.
I can relate to what you've written,
full of wisdom,soft as a kitten
we can't refuse time,or so I'm told,
I for one,refuse to grow old,
we can't re-use time,go back in the past,
what would we change,it's history at last,
they'll call me senile to my last day,
inside my heart the youth will stay...
There are so many things about childhood that would be amazsing to revisit. I don't think we ever attain adulthood. I still take small pleasures from silly things as I did when I was a child, and more and more you see the joy revisited seeing it through the eyes of your own children.
Wow, this is awesome. I for one would much rather be the pup. I'm the Peter Pan in my group of friends so I can really connect to your poem. Well done.
I love this! Just the thought of never growing up is time consuming cause you remember all the things you can do when your little. Your lists just added more to mine. I really enjoyed this. Good job
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