I'll tell you my dream.I want to be in love again. For that love to
be my last.I wish to run home to her
waiting arms every night make love to her till I can't breath.Forsaking for her all others feel her
sweat pour over me, like a waterfall.To
have the rains wash away my sins baptizing me in tears of joy.Fall asleep to the beat of her heart, all the
while her whispers caress my ears with "I love you". Play on the
beach sharing our deepest fears and grandest joys.Wake not knowing where I end, nor where she
begins.Drink of her love till I
drown.Look at the moon each night I'm
away, know she’s doing the same.Close
my eyes, feel her heart touch my soul, and know she has shared with me
something precious.Walk hand in hand
through the park at 85 stare into each
others eyes not seeing the years gone by, but the priceless love within.I want to die in her loving embrace from a
life well spent.All the while the
lofting sounds of laughter, pour through my window, as grandchildren play hide
and seek, in the fallen leaves of changing colors.To the sound of the lonesome whistle down the
river the steamers would roll.I dream
my last words to be “I love you".The last sounds I hear to be the new life crying down the hall belying echoes of the child that will take my
place.A loving tear from my beloved
wife and son, I'd pass from this world with a smile.
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It was this story that found my wife for me. For all who ever dared to dream of the great love in life. I thought of this dream and carried it with me all my life. I intend to live it and take it with me to the end. My great great grandfather immigrated to the United States years ago from Ireland. And though I never had the pleasure of knowing him. Be it enough for him to know I am thankful and happy. To him I say "thank you for my life". His spirit lives within my heart!
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i can honestly say that i have never read anything quite as beautiful as this story. The love, the passion...it was all so heart warming that i found myself blushing while reading it. Your words paint a beautiful picture, Tate. Thanks for sharing
xoxo Caitlyn xoxo
Ps- I'm extremely happy that your dream came true :) all the best to you and your loved ones
I have been afraid to write all my life,
I am dyslexic.
I just started to write in late January
I was married seven years and never even
wrote a decent birthday card.
If I only wrote her something to let her know
that I cherished her, Maybe things wold have
tuned out different. This poem grabbed me and
helped me see the power of Truelove poetry
Thank you my friend,
Thanks for pointing out this poem again. I have read this poem several times before, but i have not reviewed it. So let me do it now.
I didn't review it before since it would take a delicate touch. The form is not the form I normally associate with poetry, but from you, I think this might be one of the better forms for you, well suited to your romanticism and unfettered by a more structured poetic form, giving your romanticism more full sway.
In short, I like this poem and think it is one of your best efforts. It is no surprise that such a piece could win you a new bride.
Kudos, Tate. This was greatly enjoyed. As I said this is among your very best. Giving you a rare 98 on this. The highest rating I've even given on WC.
As I was reading this, I felt as if the words were echoing back into my mind of
words so similar to those I myself had written a few years back. You are so fortunate to have found one another. God Bless you both.
This is the most beautiful dream one can dream. It is one that one wishes to be able to dream. I have dreamed this dream and it is true for me also.
Such a heart warming piece, I even found myself tearing a little. I think Im too sentimental, lol
This I do have to say its about the most beautiful write I have read on hear in hmmm well a while now. lol
Loved it Tate. Hold on to that dream and live every minute in Love
This brought tears to my eyes and a big smile to my face. Your dream is truly beautiful and I cant think of a more wonderful way to spend one's life than to share it with someone you love so completely. It is my greatest hope that your dream is reality and lasts forever. Blessings to you and yours, Tate!
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