Spring Love

Rebecca and I

 

In spring lovebirds hover fancy

till morning lit by the dew

Takes back winter's heartache

restoring the love in you

 

The desperate cries of anguish

from a heart that knows no joy

Feeds long upon its own regret

tossing the soul as if a toy

 

Give to me your heartaches

lie down in the meadow green

Let go the sorrow of past loves

have rain wash the soul clean

 

Always to blossom in springtime

love feeds us of our dreams

Washing away the winter sorrows

from each one or so it seems

 

Take all of what you've been given

set aside pieces in you there-of

No broken promise of joy's embrace

can outshine a true heart in love

 

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Author's Note

Spring renews all then forgives the pains of winter with hope.

Reviews

[Manda]

this was very very good. the flow and grammar was very nice. i liked the way you wrote this piece. well done! 100/100

[Star Wolf]

Spring is a time of love and passion when all of nature is waking up. Love can be beautiful.

[Faelyn ó Cuilinn]

Very beautiful. It gives me a sense of innocence and passion. the structure is really pleasant as well. Quite charming really!

[Charles]

This is one of your best efforts. The whole thing brings to my mind the writing of some of the classic, romantic poets with a heavy touch of Dickenson. The structure and language is just superb and a reflection of great talent (more than some of the other poems of yours I've seen - to be quite honest and blunt). I like the imagery, the meter and the rhyming. Really excellent work. If I may: line 3, winters needs apostrophe; line 7, it's doesn't need apostrophe; line 10, lay should be lie; line 18, enemy harbored doubt disrupts the meter; line 23, joys needs apoatrophe. Great poem!

[Frantzuu]

I like how you break the stanzas the lines added a little more flavor to the poem to me, great job on that one again :D

[R J Askew]

'Give to me your heartaches' is the best verse for me. It sounds like Jesus or Nature urging us to unburden ourselves and feel a sense of renewal. Never a bad thing.

[Cassandra D.]

I really loved the imagery given.
This was very nicely written.

[MusicJunkie66]

excellent imagery, and it makes you get a comfortable, warm feeling inside :]

[Poetic Beauty]

I know I feel more depressed in the winter months and then spring comes and it feels like freedom to my soul and body. I love the smell of the flowers and the warm sun on my face. This poems speaks to all of us who feel like this. the flow of this poem is easy to read. The words are wonderful and I love the last stanza in this poem. I know that I am happier in the spring summer and fall. Winter comes and I am all doom and gloom. Great work getting the idea of this poem across.

[An owl on the moon]

What a lifting write that takes us into the heart of love, and the depth of its fullness. Beautiful in every way, like the spring...