Dear Lord, this was so beautiful I swear it touched my soul. Every line is like a burst of overwhelming beauty the not only encourages but pushes and tugs at the reader to read on and crave more. Honestly, I was breathless by the end of it, my eyes were absorbed by each word as was the rest of being, reading this was an experience I wouldn't mind having a few hundred times more. Thank you for sharing.
-Cathrine
1st things 1st Tate...I love this song...when the ship comes in....touch of Dylan, Donovan, Paxton, Rush, and Arlo...
and reading this beautiful write with the song as a background made it even more emotional for me....I don't know if you wrote it to the melody....but words can't begin to describe the way I feel after reading this.
Stunningly wonderful, no matter who it's about...the fact it's about your children makes it even more poignant...
and heartfelt...
Saved as my favorite....because it is
Well done, Tate
allen
Posted 13 Years Ago
Absolutely! I feel exactly the same about my own. Said with sincerity in the poem.
you are beautiful indeed. this would be what i wish to express about my children when i decide to have them. ahhhhh the joys of parenthood and the perspective children bring. enjoyed.
ur poem is really nice write, do have a look to mine "QUEST OF LIFE"-
" it is about how one neglects his life ,pondering about this precious gift of nature unnecessarily ".
Aren't they though? I love my children so much and I thank God for them all the time. I do not only love them and treasure them as well, but I am also so very proud of them.
Extremely sweet. It feels so personal, it seems like I'm almost invading your privacy. Even so, this really private and emotional poem is so easy to relate with, and so touching though I may not personally know those lucky children of yours. You're really a very good poet, and so much more.
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