God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[JENY]

wow…
it is divine…
your lines….have a spiritual touch….
I appreciate it..
A very nice poem…

[Calypso]

I wish this was true.

[George Love]

Love it! Very inspiring work!

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

Beautiful. My favorite stanza is:
"Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this small world

for all, the loving and the meek"

Well written, I have no critiques as usual. ^.^

[Mark]

God addressing an infant, and advising him of his responsibilities and his reward--what a unique perspective, Tate! Very thought provoking!

[tynamite]

So do I wish it was true for all of us to have good chances in life to achieve good things and be nice kind people. I like how you are good at writing the sort of things that God would say to a man.

[SusanB]

Love it Tate!

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amen

[No use.]

sagacious words , the golden bells ring~

[Richard Williams]

Very loving and gentle, a superb example of our humanity's expressive heart.