God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[s y e]

Haha, the picture made me laugh and it's very cute!

There was so many amazing lines that I loved.

"I give you my stars to hold"

It flowed really well, great job!

[Tate Morgan]

thank you Raising Tate has been the greatest experience I ever had and so filled me with wonder as to outstrip my former times racing horses.

[s y e]

(-: Welcome!

[patricia]

Cute picture - lovely words - love is all there is.
Favourite line: I give you my stars to hold
Beautiful flow and great rythm.
A very special poem Tate. Loved it.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you very much We all have something or someone to be thankful for

[Emerald Seas]

An excellent writing, Tate. Proud fatherly words!

[Tate Morgan]

Little tate makes me smile way too much

[quinfinn]

i love this piece, i feel connected, even though i am not a father. excellent write, Tate.

[Tate Morgan]

I can tell you fatherhood is really fun

[quinfinn]

i have had tastes of fatherhood by being a "stepfather" to the children of those women whom i have shared my life with. i know how gratifying and rewarding those feelings are. but , alas, i have never sired my own ....

[Tate Morgan]

I only have one that i sired But he is a better man than i am and so i feel i have done what i set out to do

[StayAnchored]

I think you did a brilliant job!

[LadyNaida]

I agree with Nayan,

I also I loved these lines....

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Beautiful!

[Marie Harrison]

You have but one fleeting chance
plant the seeds of love to grow
Create a life long everlasting

Lovely poetry.
Perfect song to draw us in too!

[light and ashes]

So do I, this is a such a beautiful poem. Bravo!

[Coyote Poetry]

Great photo. I have many of my babies when their eyes made us thankful to be alive. Thank you for the beautiful poem and the photo. Our children give us peace and happiness. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Revolutionary]

I like the way you betrayed gd speaking to the baby.All the effects were a nice touch.love your style