God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[Dhaye]

Beautiful!
I'm sorry it's late for me to read this one. (:

[Ezequiel Esquibal]

A very sweet wish for humanity, Tate.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Excellent poem Tate and your son is such a sweetheart! thanks for sharing the pix. This write warms the heart and gives life and meaning to our existence. Beautiful Tate!

[Michael G.]

Lovely.

[Jack...]

Being a brand new grandfather, these words hit home. Very nice.

[Melobldnfr]

Splendid, Tate! Xo. Thank you so for sharing!

[Talal Hussain]

So beautiful...just loved it :-)

[N!LoC]

(exhale).... gosh... tate .... just beautiful stuff

[Pete Langley]

Lovely sentiment, Tate. Well done, mate. P.

[Missy Lorraine]

This is such a feel good poem. It also flowed very nicely and you rhymes were perfect. Never disappointed!

[Tate Morgan]

Missy I havent heard from you in a while how are you

[Missy Lorraine]

I'm good, I have just been very busy. Getting ready to graduate pretty soon, so I've been making sure everything is in order. How are you?

[Tate Morgan]

im fine thanks good for you