God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I still love your work Amazing and Breathtaking. blessings

[Tate Morgan]

thank you Yeah this picture of my son was easy to relate and write a poem for

[A. Amos]

Deep and very meaningful poem Tate, good job bro for such a beautiful writing.

[Tate Morgan]

A.Amos Thank you so much it is always with the best of heart that i find the goodness that gives mankind the right to exist

[A. Amos]

Yes and the beauty of your poetry is there is always a deep message for everyone, keep the good work and when ever you get free check out my work Face of God, you will like it for sure

[Cree Nations]

Tate this is beautiful. I was thinking much about my niece and that it's been two long years since she left us. I was very sad until I read your words. Thank you.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Che I am so glad it gave you solace It was meant to do just that

[WILDERNESS]

The luckiest man on earth is the one who has discovered God in his life, the Supreme who is more closer to man than his jugular vein. You are blessed......................and the poem is a treat..................... Great.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank u I am on the road and using my phone to answer this review thank u

[Lourisa]

What a lovely poem! Beautiful imagery as always.

[KristynRuth]

Wonderful as always

[Leigh]

Hey great write, very profound and meaningful, which I like and carries through well in this beautiful piece

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Leigh nice to hear from you today thank you that little boy is now 17 and went to the prom last week lol

[Leigh]

Hi Tate,
That is so amazing, my lad is 17 this year too

[Tate Morgan]

Oh you have to see his picture now it is at the bottom here
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/aristate/1171829/

[Leigh]

That's a great and happy photo, nice

[Tate Morgan]

isnt it God yesterday he was this little guy

[Leigh]

I think I know what you mean

[Tate Morgan]

I miss the little guy

[minisla]

Lovely poem Tate and the accompanying video is not a bad choice either RIP Richie

[Tate Morgan]

Hi thank you very much i used richie havens because he died the other day He was a singer from woodstock

[Angelique]

If only we could all understand these wishes for humanity. In light of a poem I just finished, I am glad I came across this one. It reminds me that He is there even when we cannot feel him. Thank you for sharing.

[Valentine]

Beautiful write, and beautiful baby..is he yours? If so I am jealous..Kathie

[Tate Morgan]

yes its little tatertot