God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[Inner Rain]

Great job!

"You have but one fleeting chance
plant the seeds of love to grow
Create a life long everlasting
such as none could ever know"

These is a wonderful stanza...
Overall this is a good piece... Good job. :D

[Caitlynxoxo]

beautifully written; your wish is one that touches the heart :) i especially loved these lines:

"I am he who gave you life
beneath my sky gone gold
As sunset burns and dies
I give you my stars to hold"

It was, all in all, a very enjoyable read! I loved the description and how you've protrayed a perfect life in your preception (which, in actuality, is everyone's) of what it looks like. Suffice to say, i loved this!! Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Lilly]

A beautiful wish you have...lovely rhyme in this also

[Dark Empress]

Aw, what a beautiful poem. Amazing. The music goes well with it to. Great work, Tate.

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Great poem! OUTSTANDING!!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Wonderfully Done. Congrats on this great winning poem

[Norma M Sutton]

This is beautiful.

[Muhammad]

I think if God could sum up His emotions in poetic prose, this is how He would word it. 100/100

[bluessadmood]

ohh how you reflect my thoughts of a happy life..this is all we get out of it..and we win
its a fleeting chance,you have to plant lots of love so it may grow,or hate will run ahead of us
choose life against a hateful death and you will be a happy soul,this world will be yours and mine
its us who will inherit the all of it..its us who will make it a lovely place to live in
lovely write..