God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[R J Askew]

'you have but one fleeting chance' is a great reminder to us all to 'get it right' or try our level best to as best we can.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Whoa! This is a true inspiration.
The bond here is unbreakable.

[Ramiz Ilham Khan]

'Upon which all life does seek' - so warm and great. :-)

[E. A. Fielder]

This poem had very nice flow to it. Very warming and happy, helped me have good start to my day!

[KatiePie]

This makes me realize all of the beauty, all of the miracles, the glory, the wonder and the love that surrounds us the second we walk out the door, the second we breathe, the second we live. Its so amazing. Great write. :)
-Cathrine

[Desert Dreamer]

Plant the seeds of love...so beautiful.

[Bard Constantine]

Beautiful sentiments... with all the doom and gloom we tend to overlook the little miracles and good intentions that occur every day. This certainly is a pleasant reminder...

[Wondering Mind]

and I wish you the best you wish yourself, my friend.
Lovely thoughts in a lovely rhyme

[AlieahRose]

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL...

[Norma M Sutton]

Nice.