God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[LazerRays]

What a soft and sweet poem to read, i very much enjoyed reading it. It reminds me of the poems my grandmother used to hang on her fridge, as a kid I thought that stuff was a bore. Now I find comfort and compassion in poems like these

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Sarah. I always see the better part of us in the hope we will find a better way.

[Robert Trakofler]

Hello Tate, I wish that I could be so optimistic as these lines but there seems to be this disconnect with people in society these days that trickles into my poetry and makes it near impossible to write with hope in my lines I am trying good sir but it seems to come out forced and forced never makes for good poetry. I will have to bank these lines in my memory and let them percolate into something of hope as they did so finely IN YOUR lines!

[Tate Morgan]

Take the hopeful side assume the best it helps in the end lol nice to hear from you my friend.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Tate,

Religious' I am not, but a truest Fan of Humanity I am, and I must say that this is a most profoundly beautiful piece of Poetry ...

Marve

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Marv so am I

[Miss Sharon]

I must add...your son is absolutely adorable! ~ Sharon

[Tate Morgan]

Thanks he’s a peach

[Miss Sharon]

(You will inherit this little world you the loving and the meek) I will it to be so! This is a beautiful write Tate...as are ALL of the ones I've read! ~Sharon

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Sharon There’s such a simple difference between selflessness and selfishness. Only one of the 2 swells your heart And gives you a soul

[Miss Sharon]

SO very true my friend! ~Sharon

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Sharon

[M. J. Smith]

Beautiful words, my friend. And as heartfelt a prayer as this old drifter has heard in too long.
So many thinking only if themselves, thinking only of today. I have spent too many nights asking the moon what kind of world my daughter is going to inherit.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you MJ I have been off a couple days working. It is my fervent help that we are not the last generation to enjoy our lives.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'God To Man'
Tate Morgan,
The clues of good live in people...clues to design...desire to be good....find good...to fail...and cry. Still looking for the glory. This poem a reminder of the good God of all and our need.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Kathy I like to hope

[Relic]

So much wisdom in one little poem. Expertly done, Tate. One of your best. :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you relic I appreciate that

[Little Whisper]

Such a beautiful message in this poem... the response that comes to mind is... Amen.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you dear I
That made me smile

[An owl on the moon]

Your words always elevate our existence, my friend. From the moment you joined us here, you've been a joy and a voice to pull us on into the fray of life.

[Tate Morgan]

Hours is a friendship not Everest by distance time or space