My Girl

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Could she hear my heart calling

for the love I never show

 

Treading lightly along beside

her footprints marked the snow

The warmth of heart I felt for her

I doubt she will ever know

 

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Oh if I could stop Earth turning

then she might never go

 

 

Tate Morgan 2008

Author's Note

A gem stone of my life every bit as precious as the eyes from which she views the world.

Reviews

[the_stoic]

i always fall short of words of praise for your writes tate ! just to tell you i spring up whenever i see a new write by you :) ... loved the way you said "if only you could stop the earth" .. short yet sweet

[ShAb]

I love the picture.:) beautiful description..:)

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

Wow that's passionate great work

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nice poem Tate. You captured the feelings that really matter. Everything is pure and the emotions are genuine.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

In related writing on my Sara I found: "My Girl" and, mo music Tate? ... PLEASE ADD ...

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No words Bro... just. AWESOME! Romon found an Review fer you Tate. Lhe perfect song for this here... Temptations fer sure man.

[emma]

The earth continues to turn and sometimes all we are left with are regrets, for the things we didn't do, the chances we didn't take and the words we should have said but were scared to. Great write!

[Blue tailed kite]

Beautiful poem.....it makes me feel kinda warm and fuzzy...nice write.

[Esha]

fantastic work...

[Magdelena]

Beautiful!!! And congratulations. You so deserved the win. Your work makes me sigh and my heart smile..


Maggie xx