My Girl

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Could she hear my heart calling

for the love I never show

 

Treading lightly along beside

her footprints marked the snow

The warmth of heart I felt for her

I doubt she will ever know

 

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Oh if I could stop Earth turning

then she might never go

 

 

Tate Morgan 2008

Author's Note

A gem stone of my life every bit as precious as the eyes from which she views the world.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

See now, i felt that the work had more of this tune http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QFjqN6a_aMQ

[Pitta S Dev]

BEAUTIFUL

Wonderful words of your true muse Tate. Nicer to keep it a secret, that makes better poetry! and gives all the inspiration.... :) lovely work.

[Distant horizons]

I hope she did know. Beautifully captured memory.

[Tommy]

Yes, this is a great piece! It takes me back to the moment when I first felt love of that kind, I wanted to stop time, and live that moment forever with her...

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[qaralynn]

it's a very beautiful poem...great work!!!

[Geralyn Miller]

So lovely, sweet; your words weave a lacey tracery of unrequited love. Powerful emotion handled with delicacy, good write.

[Samuel Dickens]

I guess there is something even more sad about this than is obvious, indicated by your saying "was" and speaking in past tense, or am I taking it wrong? In any event, your words grip my heart.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

im in love with this one

[Becca*Type2012]

Awww! Sweet poem about the one you love!