My Girl

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Could she hear my heart calling

for the love I never show

 

Treading lightly along beside

her footprints marked the snow

The warmth of heart I felt for her

I doubt she will ever know

 

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Oh if I could stop Earth turning

then she might never go

 

 

Tate Morgan 2008

Author's Note

A gem stone of my life every bit as precious as the eyes from which she views the world.

Reviews

[TrimarcoRansome]

I love this one, Tate! and yes it did cheer me up :-) thank you

[Tate Morgan]

Something told me you might

[OTownPete]

Lean in to her ear and whisper all the desires that reside in your heart my friend...then she may finally know. Enjoyable write my friend. Your friend in words, Pete

[Tate Morgan]

I guess i just always liked the idea of something unattainable

[L.Edward]

Great clincher. Love that last line. Short sweet and powerful. A work of true love!

[Tate Morgan]

I always like to distill my work to the fewest words thank you

[L.Edward]

Your welcome. Thanx for keeping me posted.

[Leslie Philibert]

A writer I like, who uses mulit-media well and is well liked

[Tate Morgan]

Les thanks I needed to hear that today

[A Soap Mess Stories]

You are such a romantical guy. Your words so full of passion. Lovely! :-)

[Tate Morgan]

Thanks star.The world could use a little more romance

[A Soap Mess Stories]

So true .......

[Blue Belle]

It is a lovely poem. Very romantic.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you Blue may your life be romantic

[Rita L. Sev]

"If I could stop the Earth turning..." If only this were possible, and we could go back to those old loves... A wistful sigh in this poem, Tate. Old loves recalled never get old...

[Tate Morgan]

I seem cursed or blessed depending on who's talking Because i cannot forget anything thank you

[Frieda P]

Touching tribute, but you know you're getting bugged until you give up the goods here Tate! Great music too............!

[Seashell]

This is a beautiful tribute to an old love. We can move on and even be happy with our lives, but still in our hearts can lie a love like no other.
:'(

Thank you for sharing a tiny wee piece of your past x

[Tate Morgan]

Thanks Babs i guess we all have our memories by which we judge all others

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

A lovely and wistful write. I automatically thought of a lost lover, but after rereading, it could apply to any important/memorable female in one's life. As always, so well done!

[Tate Morgan]

Thanks Sharon It is just the girl I once knew