My Girl

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Could she hear my heart calling

for the love I never show

 

Treading lightly along beside

her footprints marked the snow

The warmth of heart I felt for her

I doubt she will ever know

 

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Oh if I could stop Earth turning

then she might never go

 

 

Tate Morgan 2008

Author's Note

A gem stone of my life every bit as precious as the eyes from which she views the world.

Reviews

[timthy]

short and sweet! beautiful piece!

[Tate Morgan]

Thanks Tim

[SallyDM]

Romantic in a heartfelt delicate kind of way, simple and beautiful. I too love this one Tate.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you sally

[melissa]

I love this poem tate you write great poems tate

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I am partial to0 this one too

[WE]

a very romantic and beautiful piece

[Tate Morgan]

thank you gracie It is always good to look bad in romantic way at the one that got away

[Eddie Phillips]

I liked the unrequited love of this poem. It speaks of innocent and internal love.

[Tate Morgan]

It was that for sure innocent Yeah she was a dream come true Thank you

[Shaun Payton]

Just lovely Tate. You endear to her what the true form of beauty is...Love in admiration and thankfulness. Splendid sir.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Shaun I am a hopeless romantic Im afraid

[Shaun Payton]

thats a good thing...equals wonderful poetry :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. I like the ending. Would be nice if we could stop time and spend time with the people we love and need. Thank you my friend for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Tate Morgan]

Coyote So nice to see you again . Wouldnt it be nice if we could go back and see those we lost in out past ? It has been a little while since we talked We should catch up a little and thank you sir.

[minisla]

I can relate to the line "for the love I never show". Tate great stuff yet again.

[Tate Morgan]

I suppose we all try to get past our fears me included thank you

[Dominique Lambright]

This is very romantic, like most of the work I have read of yours. You know which words fit together well

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you very much I must say i am glad she chose me

[Dominique Lambright]

Most of us are when we find that one :)

[Tate Morgan]

Ive been lucky that way