The Secret

A Dream

Becky

Happy 14th Anniversary.

 

I dreamed three words within my mind

that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start

I'd hid these words I'd treasured so
praying they would only heed
But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You

Tate

                     

Author's Note

The answer to all who seek it. The eternal valentine !!

Reviews

[Magdelena]

This was stunning! I saw so much in you piece that I felt as if i were reading one of my own. To hide behind ourselves, as I know many of us do, including I! Then to suddenly feel that freedom to come forth and speak of what is in our hearts is a feeling of re-birth. Like being a child again and finding their first joy in life and running with it.. That's what I saw in your piece. The feelings of 'at last I am free'


Fantastic!


Magdelena xx

[PadfootBlack]

There is no other word to describe this besides; Beautiful.
100%

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a beautiful tenderness to these words. You let your heart be known and your devotion, and it gives us all a feeling of what love is meant to be. Thank you so much for sharing.

[the_stoic]

really appreciate the way this ended .. "first be I .. the others Love and You" .. amazing write again

[SimplyDisastrous]

This is a beautiful piece of work, Tate! A job well done, as always (:

[Mai Aliza]

You never disappoint me Tate, great write.

[Brianna Brie]

Beautiful, Tate. Those three words are stunning. :-)

[CherryBomb]

Unbelievable!
This really brought my attention!

[Ladysue]

This is stunningly beautiful....

[Jeff]

Wow! This is an excellent poem.

[writing_for_you]

This poem can give such an impact on people. I really liked reading this. You can always feel the emotion behind each poem.