The Secret

A Dream

Becky

Happy 14th Anniversary.

 

I dreamed three words within my mind

that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start

I'd hid these words I'd treasured so
praying they would only heed
But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You

Tate

                     

Author's Note

The answer to all who seek it. The eternal valentine !!

Reviews

[Magdelena]

This was stunning! I saw so much in you piece that I felt as if i were reading one of my own. To hide behind ourselves, as I know many of us do, including I! Then to suddenly feel that freedom to come forth and speak of what is in our hearts is a feeling of re-birth. Like being a child again and finding their first joy in life and running with it.. That's what I saw in your piece. The feelings of 'at last I am free'


Fantastic!


Magdelena xx

[DESTROYA]

very nice! feels comeplete wit the picture and song

[Manpreet]

Very Sweet Poem!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I know the feeling and love how it comes together, great job. well done,

[The Analog Kid]

Nice work and great ending.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Another great piece of poetry here. Raw emotion and classic romance.
This kind of work is good for the heart.

[Mary Fioratti]

Very sweeti poem, Tate. I really know what has been a Valentine...for so ...so...many years.
Very special poem, and you ended in a cute way...
*Mary*

[Seshat Nidaba]

you have a touching way of saying the 'right' things, your timing and phrasing is exceptional.

[light and ashes]

Very beautiful poem

[Emunah June.]

How wonderful.

although I do have a question: Aren't you married? Is this your wife? Im confused.

But this is still beautiful. I think you did such an amazing job.

[roy mccarthy]

this is awesome,the last verse is great,
very beautiful write!