The Secret

A Dream

Becky

Happy 14th Anniversary.

 

I dreamed three words within my mind

that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start

I'd hid these words I'd treasured so
praying they would only heed
But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You

Tate

                     

Author's Note

The answer to all who seek it. The eternal valentine !!

Reviews

[Magdelena]

This was stunning! I saw so much in you piece that I felt as if i were reading one of my own. To hide behind ourselves, as I know many of us do, including I! Then to suddenly feel that freedom to come forth and speak of what is in our hearts is a feeling of re-birth. Like being a child again and finding their first joy in life and running with it.. That's what I saw in your piece. The feelings of 'at last I am free'


Fantastic!


Magdelena xx

[Enid Blake]

So many are prisoners who do not understand the freedom of those three little words. Cool love poem Tate.

[Tate Morgan]

thanks Enid Nice to see you today

[TrimarcoRansome]

ohh different from your norm! I like it. Very simple and so effective too, great flow as always with your poems, Tate

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Helen I thank you Yeah she was the subject of many of my poems.She is still my friend and we talk now and again

[wordwarrior]

Such beautiful writing Tate. it made me sigh and smile with awe.
A sublime poem.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you i am touched

[Leslie Philibert]

I`m probably a bit stupid today, didn`t exactly understand the background of the picture of the young lady and the Bee Gees, but I liked the poem....

[Angi]

Every woman wants these words, Tate! Lovely! Angi~

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Angi so glad you liked it.I WROTE IT YRS AGO TO A GIRL IN IRELAND

[Marie]

Ilike this song, but it's rather dark for the Bee Gees...

[Tate Morgan]

Yes it is but it fit the valentine thank you

[Holly Mason]

sorry for this but first I love the bee gee's and I needed that...truly what a small world
second- hope you are feeling better
third-if this is a Valentine...what a gift
always beautiful
always down to earth
always ...just you Tate a gifted word soldier
thank you for sharing fine sir

[Tate Morgan]

I too love the bee gees and thought this fit well I wrote this for Lucy Hamilton of Ireland for Valentines in 2008 or 9 I think It is in one of the books

[trainwreck]

This was beautiful! Your work is simply stunning. Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you dear I always like hearing from you.May I hope you settle for nothing less from the loves of your own life

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Beautifully done! What a lovely ode to love in general. If only I could be so lucky as to have something like this written to/for me; it's the dream of every girl, I think. This did remind me a little of a valentine...perhaps it was the rhyme scheme. Well done!

[Tate Morgan]

Awe i wrote this to Lucy Hamilton of Ireland a few years back .She liked it too.She liked all the poems I gave her. I sent this one and the others to her in the books I had promised to write. She called two weeks later crying . It was a great feeling

[Criss ;)]

That's pretty amazin' fella.....!
It's really very nice poem, i think this's based on love's facts'...lol, very nice, you'e really opened your secrets..n these're really very nice tor read...
good poem, you know what fella....i liked this much
I dreamed three words within my mind
that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start......

your startin's damn nice n lovely to read fella...keep it up :)
great job
have a nice writin' fella...!!