The Secret

A Dream

Becky

Happy 14th Anniversary.

 

I dreamed three words within my mind

that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start

I'd hid these words I'd treasured so
praying they would only heed
But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You

Tate

                     

Author's Note

The answer to all who seek it. The eternal valentine !!

Reviews

[Magdelena]

This was stunning! I saw so much in you piece that I felt as if i were reading one of my own. To hide behind ourselves, as I know many of us do, including I! Then to suddenly feel that freedom to come forth and speak of what is in our hearts is a feeling of re-birth. Like being a child again and finding their first joy in life and running with it.. That's what I saw in your piece. The feelings of 'at last I am free'


Fantastic!


Magdelena xx

[Einstein Noodle]

https://youtu.be/qLTdRqYwzXQ

exploding those words held in check for so long did not make it better for me in the moment .. she looked at me in bewilderment and friendship .. ugh! the worst thing ever right!?? ;)

no finer valentine to write .. will copy and send to the ..one i'm with :))
E.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Einstein yeah it is always the risk of rejection that makes them so precious

[Einstein Noodle]

love you brother! a wonderful voice you have .. one to pass on to my own children ..
E.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you so much

[Barbz]

Three little words with the Herculean power, enough to move mountains. I have probably heard and said those three words every day of my life....I just read them... Thank You for what you do so well. barb

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you barb I am humbled by your attentions

[realmwriter]

Love is the only answer to any conflict. And it is always better when you have someone to share it with. Well done as always Tate.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you very much as always so nice to see you

[realmwriter]

You are very welcome.

[Ena Lona Kendra]

I love it. I wish I could find a guy who is like that. making poems and stuff!!!

[Tate Morgan]

thank you ena so nice of you to say

[Ena Lona Kendra]

I admire and respect you as a guy.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you that is always nice to hear

[MomzillaNC]

Very sweet and perfect for the challenge. You just keep coming up with these gems that I've missed somehow!

[Tate Morgan]

thank you dear

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Chris]

This left me smiling...well spoken Tate.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Chris I always liked the simplicity of this peice

[timthy]

A gem of a poem and a gem of a song by the bee gees ! Great work brother!!!

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Tim

[AprilRN1210]

Oh this one is so sweet... Those three words that longed to touch her heart.. I think that just melted my heart.. Those, I think are the three hardest words to ever utter to another soul when you truly FEEL them.. It can free those feelings and allow your heart to soar... I loved this heartfelt treasure..

[Tate Morgan]

Awe thank you. Years after we met I remarried and sent the 3 books containing the works I had written to Lucy to her in Ireland. She called 2 weeks later crying over them.I had promised her that one day i would publish them all and i kept my word .

[AprilRN1210]

I bet she did... I would be a hot mess if someone were to write me beautiful words like this.. jeez.. you write from the heart and with great skill.. You are more than welcome. It was my pleasure..

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Lucy is still our best friend and my wife and i call her often to laugh at her accent and adore her

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem tate Keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Tate Morgan]

thank you dear

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Cranky Old Bear]

Beautiful... I loved it.. :)

[Tate Morgan]

thank you she is still to this day 8 yrs later still a best friend

[Cranky Old Bear]

Couldn't ask for more.. :)

[Tate Morgan]

yeaH I AGREE