The Secret

A Dream

Becky

Happy 14th Anniversary.

 

I dreamed three words within my mind

that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start

I'd hid these words I'd treasured so
praying they would only heed
But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You

Tate

                     

Author's Note

The answer to all who seek it. The eternal valentine !!

Reviews

[Magdelena]

This was stunning! I saw so much in you piece that I felt as if i were reading one of my own. To hide behind ourselves, as I know many of us do, including I! Then to suddenly feel that freedom to come forth and speak of what is in our hearts is a feeling of re-birth. Like being a child again and finding their first joy in life and running with it.. That's what I saw in your piece. The feelings of 'at last I am free'


Fantastic!


Magdelena xx

[Great Aunt Astri]

Very sweet three words. I love the way the words would not stay hidden, and you had to heed their wish and let them fly to your love.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you astri she was once an obsession of mine

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"The Secret"
Tate Morgan,
A secret is mentioned in above poem which is part of the mystery of the three threaded theme of a special gift of love. It felt like an expression of a very large promise to another one freed from a kind of bondage. A promise given to be and share and be available; different for the future than the past.
I love to analyze and ponder so this one was perfect!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Kathy. She was is a Irish girl I once was so in love with. To this day we are best of friends and speak on the phone every week. Her voice is so melodic it hypnotizes me

[Hannah]

Such a beautiful expression of emotion! Very romantic and beautifully written.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Hannah Hope all is well

[Sammi]

This is so wonderfully warming Tate in every way a girl needs to feel touched by a man's deeper truer secret feelings and what an amazing flow to your poetry with perfect rhyming to capture the heart's attention and the mind's imagination and I love that song -- thank you for the thrill! ;)

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you sammi that made me smile

[Susan 🦋]

What a truly romantic piece! I'm hanging on each word written..and melting in the process. Simply amazing.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Susan warms the heart to hear that

[heartspeaks]

Awwwwww! This was so so so so so sweet and beautifully romantic. Quite the words every girl wants to hear. The framing of words is so beautiful and just in few lines it shows so much magic and drama. Looks like a song playing . Bravo.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I try to say as much as possible with the fewest words

[M. L. F.]

Wow... Tate, Amazing write! I love the way you worded this work for her. It is not so simple in technique, yet in emotion is simplistic and pure. Beautiful the way you have made an emotional build-up, a story with a start and a clear finish in such a small expanse....
.... Misty

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Misty i try to use as few words as possible as common a selection of words in uncommon ways

[M. L. F.]

It shows. A nice technique you have, indeed. :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank tou very much

[wordman]

a touching write,a message from your soul to her heart .in dreams we can do anything !

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Pat yeah I am still her friend now 9 yrs later and talk to her every day thanks

[wordman]

you are welcome -=-=ron

[R Smith]

I love this Tate, it's so simple and so beautiful, your writing is the stuff of dreams and so perfect :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Richard I am one who believes the less the better. I try to pare my works to their essential parts removing anything and everything but the very core of an idea.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and words my friend. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing work.
Coyote

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Coyote She was and still is such a beautiful soul.Im surprised you found this one so far back in my pages but thank you friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. It showed-up on the screen and I had to read.