"I Love You"

So I leaned over to her ear and whispered ”I love you” Looked to the sky, came a reply ”Her's is a heart that's true”

Becky 

As my wife has often told me

”you know I love you dear”

Those eyes so kind, a sweet remind

of joy that fills each year

”So why not share your devotion

by telling the whole Earth

Shout from the hill, the inner thrill

show me what love is worth”

So I leaned over to her ear

and whispered ”I love you”

Looked to the sky, came the reply

”her's is a heart that's true”

”I hoped you'd share with everyone

the dreams this truth unfurled”

”I did my dear, lest you not fear

for you are my whole world”  

Author's Note

She is the beginning of my life the end of wanderings. My last and greatest love, My heart my soul my treasure.

Reviews

[Myenigma]

You are blessed, and I hope you guys continue being happy :), i really like the third and fourth stanza, very romantic,

[Tate Morgan]

thank you enigma I feel very blessed to have such a woman in my life

[Cherry]

Is that your wife? Well I have to say she is eternally lucky to have someone that would think of her in this way and write about it. I believe you are both lucky. This is beautiful to read.

[Tate Morgan]

Cherry yes that is my wife Rebecca. She is the very essence of my happiness thank you

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Oh my goodness. Such a love. So powerful a piece of writing. Your wife is a lucky lady, as are you for finding her. Have a very Happy and Prosperous New Year.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Clive i was just thinking of her last night as she set across the room.She kept smiling at me warmed my soul.I will never be able to repay what she gives to me .So Ill treasure it till the end of time

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Just sent you a second wish for New Year .. Sorry for repeating myself.

[nana]

Oh Taters you seem such a content soul. I think I see why now.She is a beautiful girl. May your lives ebb and flow to the tunes that you so adamantly add to our lives. This poem has a interesting twist at the end. Bless ya Tate "Nana"

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Nannette. Hmm who'da thought so many years later we would still be friends. Its the power of the good soul Thank you. We shall make it to the end you and I .

[Valentine]

True and lasting love is hard to find. It is to be cherished and treasured. Valentine

[Tate Morgan]

thank you kath

[Lox]

I have not met the wonderful person but I am sure she deserves such a piece. To wherever she may be now, she must have read this and smiled.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Lox she is a peach Im lucky to have her.She liked it lol

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A lovely and touching tribute, Tate :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Lynn hope your day is turning out well

[WriterGirl101]

This is a very beautiful poem.. This is what all love should be. Thank you for sharing... :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you very much Happy new year

[WriterGirl101]

Happy New Years! :)

[Tate Morgan]

thank you I am having a great night

[WriterGirl101]

That's great.. That's how it should be.. :D

[wordman]

a beautiful and touching tribute to your wonderful lady my friend

[Tate Morgan]

Pat good morning .I dont know what drove me to write this. I was sitting across the room thinking of all the blessings that have saved my soul. This one is the one I am most grateful for.

[wordman]

the woman is always the glue that holds everything together,young people don`t realise this for a long time

[Tate Morgan]

Oh that is soo true . We pale in comparison

[Melobldnfr]

Dear sweet man and friend, you never fail to move and amaze!

[Tate Morgan]

Melobldnfr Thank you .I only hope I can be as good a man as she has been a woman to me

[Melobldnfr]

That is a sentiment I am coming to know more and more each day as well, and I am sure you fit that bill just fine!