"I Love You"

So I leaned over to her ear and whispered ”I love you” Looked to the sky, came a reply ”Her's is a heart that's true”

Becky 

As my wife has often told me

”you know I love you dear”

Those eyes so kind, a sweet remind

of joy that fills each year

”So why not share your devotion

by telling the whole Earth

Shout from the hill, the inner thrill

show me what love is worth”

So I leaned over to her ear

and whispered ”I love you”

Looked to the sky, came the reply

”her's is a heart that's true”

”I hoped you'd share with everyone

the dreams this truth unfurled”

”I did my dear, lest you not fear

for you are my whole world”  

Author's Note

She is the beginning of my life the end of wanderings. My last and greatest love, My heart my soul my treasure.

Reviews

[Chris]

Tate... well spoken and a pleasure to pause with.

[Tate Morgan]

Chris hello my friend it has been too long for you and I I hope you are well and happy Thank you

[Chris]

I agree it HAS been too long...Good seeing you again my friend.

[Tate Morgan]

And you too Chris

[B]

A truly beautiful poem to your significant other

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Nisreen I am a fortunate man

[Periac]

as the words once were ....well written and strong....a brilliant opening of our most cherished gifts....

[Tate Morgan]

thank you periac She is my heart and soul

[Ruth]

Bless...a romantically beautifully dedication :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you my Dear Poppy You are such a shinning star.

[Ruth]

My pleasure hon :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

What an amazing piece essence of true love indeed. Beautifully put. 😊

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Guinevere It is always to nice to see another who lends them self to the joys of love over pain or sadness

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

You are most welcome. :)

[Seriana]

What a beautiful piece Tate. Such a touching, emotional tribute to one who is so dear to you. Loved it. :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Seriana I Am a very fortunate man and I am well aware of that fact. My wife is too good for the likes of me. However I shall stay with her till she comes to her senses or till the end of time lol

[A Soap Mess Stories]

The essence of true love...simply beautiful...Tate. Excellent.

[Tate Morgan]

Tootsie It is with the greatest humility That I say the kindness and the goodness in my heart is lent me by this woman.Thank you

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This is a beautiful tribute and homage to your wife. As a poet, I know that we often feel that our words are never enough, but we ever endeavor and keep trying to say it as best we can. I'm sure she loves the gift of your words.

[Tate Morgan]

Thanks Linda she and i are made for one another We are both very happy top have found one another

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

This piece was breathtaking. There is nothing greater than a man declaring his love for his treasure.

I love the last line. It brought a tear to my eye. This is indeed something all men need to learn to do. Lol.
In all seriousness, the wording was absolutely beautiful. It had this flow that was musical to the heart. I had to read it a few times, it was that amazing.

Excellent Tate. You are a true Wordsmith.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Nikki that is so sweet to hear. Smiles

[Donald Meikle]

Been there done that and yes Tate I'm still doing it

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Donald it is really a good feeling to know someone waits for us at home.Thank you