"I Love You"

So I leaned over to her ear and whispered ”I love you” Looked to the sky, came a reply ”Her's is a heart that's true”

Becky 

As my wife has often told me

”you know I love you dear”

Those eyes so kind, a sweet remind

of joy that fills each year

”So why not share your devotion

by telling the whole Earth

Shout from the hill, the inner thrill

show me what love is worth”

So I leaned over to her ear

and whispered ”I love you”

Looked to the sky, came the reply

”her's is a heart that's true”

”I hoped you'd share with everyone

the dreams this truth unfurled”

”I did my dear, lest you not fear

for you are my whole world”  

Author's Note

She is the beginning of my life the end of wanderings. My last and greatest love, My heart my soul my treasure.

Reviews

[samparks,sam]

Your really great sir, so nice what a great word with full love of feeling you express in your poem

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Sam I am touched by your words.

[Sarah]

I love this. Predictable, yet well crafted.

[Tate Morgan]

Hello Sarah thank you for stopping by I can't write enough about my wife she is the one by which I judge all others

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is so romantic, Tate! Your wife is beautiful. You two share something VERY special.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I am quite pattial to hern

[Dark Empress]

Beautiful poem. Love is a wonderful thing

[Tate Morgan]

Awe thank you she has my heart and well knows it a better man lives in me

[Renée]

Though it maybe a bit late...Cheers Tate & Becky! She looks lovely, and her eyes reflect her love for you, just as you bear your love, for her in writing.. Lovely

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Renee love you too Thanks Becky is the source of much of my happiness

[Renée]

I can tell ( :

[Imagery]

That is a very beautiful poem of love and belonging.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I am often found writing about my wife Unlike many I know how lucky i am to have her.

[J. Hampton]

beautiful...so many are not as fortunate...or never realize they are

[Tate Morgan]

Hi J. hampton thank you so much I am well aware of my luck

[barleygirl]

Even tho your poem expresses your sentiments very well, I kinda liked your author's note even more! Most of all, the first photo, the way she's looking at the camera (i.e. "you") . . . this speaks many more volumes than you've written here. To me, I see that the love is very much mutual (in her eyes). Thanks for sharing your beloved with the world! *smile*

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you yes she has my heart and sure knows it wish that others would have the same experience

[LadyNaida]

I love the music, what is the name of this piece?

[Tate Morgan]

thank you it is Procol Harum - A Whiter Shade of Pale, recorded in denmark in 2006

[LadyNaida]

Absolutely beautiful, I love it.

[Tate Morgan]

It is one of
My favorite recordings

[LadyNaida]

This is so beautiful. Is good to know I'm not the only hopeless romantic. Wow, such a love!

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you naida It is always nice to wake up to a person so beloved by me