"I Love You"

So I leaned over to her ear and whispered ”I love you” Looked to the sky, came a reply ”Her's is a heart that's true”

Becky 

As my wife has often told me

”you know I love you dear”

Those eyes so kind, a sweet remind

of joy that fills each year

”So why not share your devotion

by telling the whole Earth

Shout from the hill, the inner thrill

show me what love is worth”

So I leaned over to her ear

and whispered ”I love you”

Looked to the sky, came the reply

”her's is a heart that's true”

”I hoped you'd share with everyone

the dreams this truth unfurled”

”I did my dear, lest you not fear

for you are my whole world”  

Author's Note

She is the beginning of my life the end of wanderings. My last and greatest love, My heart my soul my treasure.

Reviews

[Sira YR]

This is so beautiful and touching. Your wife is one lucky woman. Well done, the stanzas flowed beautiful and the song at the end made me want to cry. Wonderful job, sir, truly :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you That is very touching. A man needs to know where his happiness comes from .With me it is my good wife.

[Sira YR]

Well that's good and you are very welcome. I can tell from this piece alone that you are an extremely talented and seasoned writer. Kudos to you! And happy holidays to you and your wife :)

[Tate Morgan]

Merry Christmas new friend.

[An owl on the moon]

Even your note is a beautiful song of your love for her. May your love and life always be full of joy and peace in each other's presence as your poetry moves the heart deeply.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Craig i am lucky to have a wife who tolerates my wandering child like mind. If there is any saving grace to me it has to be devotion. May that be enough.

[An owl on the moon]

Your devotion is your loving, and that is surely more than enough, my friend.

[Tate Morgan]

Smiles Merry Christmas my friend.You are one of the oldest friendships i have here 2009 I think when I first came here. You were one of the very first friends I made. Thank you. I am nothing if not a fierce friend to anyone who has shown me kindness.

[An owl on the moon]

You've seen dear poets come and go here. And I remember when you first came, and am so glad you stayed. Thank you for your fierce friendship. Best of gifts any time of year, my friend.

[Tate Morgan]

You too Craig. I hope you have a great time this year If you have grandchildren i hope you hear the voice of your father in your newborn grandchildrens cries.. You are a good man.Your father would be proud.

[lightsong]

I admire a poet who will bring his Wife into his pages like this, I completely understand her want, her need, her request to be there, here upon Your page, isn't she after all the inspiration behind those pages? the "beautiful brilliant" she?

a creative Love, Your one seems to be.

Bless You both with the happiest warmest bliss*

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I am honored

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

'here's is a heart that is true.' This struck me most, Tate. When s man find a heart that's made for him, he lives longer. Well crafted.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Sir may you too find such contentment

[Sourav]

Lovely... Romantic... Full of passion! :)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you very much

[Susan 🦋]

Just pick me up off the floor!!!! To hear such words! Ahhhhhh true love at it's finest. You are a lucky man.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you I often write poems to my wife. She is always happy to receive them . Love is the only thing worth remembering The recipient is as happy to receive them as You were to give them

[pierced_rebel]

Very very very lovely. It is encouraging to know true love really exists

[Tate Morgan]

thank you so much

[APOORVA]

just lovely...keep up this good writing

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Apoorva I appreciate the words

[MysteriousAries]

there's something within your works that is so addictive... Rhyme and Emotions...

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I try to stick to a very restricted metered rhyme they teaches a lesson while conveying a story

[Tate Morgan]

The meter is the other thing it must beat along like the rhythms of a train track

[MysteriousAries]

Yeah, hopefully i will learn and try one someday... All my writing are kinda unorthodox... lol...

[Tate Morgan]

Well I can help in that regard if you like

[MysteriousAries]

That's very kind of you Sir... Thank You...

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome
let me see what i can find to help

[MysteriousAries]

looking forward for it Sir... :)

[boygene borice]

This is a beautiful love poem. Each line has life in it.

[Tate Morgan]

I humbly thank you