"Aris and Andrew it is with all the love in my heart I grant you both my blessing and that of my ancestors. May it be enough"
My daughter Aris's life is about to change. Her fiance is arriving home tonight on a flight from Afghanistan. I am going to be the man who walks her down the aisle fulfilling her childhood dream of getting married to prince charming. Has it really been that long?
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the greatest treasure in the world is true love
hold to that miracle burning in your still wanting
still hungry for simpler things as to never forgotten
by what life offers love
By, your every word, I can feel the bond between you and your daughter. What can have more blithe than recounciling. Your daughter is going to have, that. I can assess, her happiness. Because, I too have many experiences of that.
You,would have employed much effort, because for the reason being, the love of being in relationships, can't even be expressed by words.
I loved this poem.
I can see, that you are having a dilemma. That whether to be happy, that she met her fiance, after a long time or be sad, because she is going to embark on the new journey of life, without you.
Well, you have every right, to be in that sort of dilemma.
I think, Aris is lucky, to have a father like you.
My best wishes,
Devanshu
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you it is a great thing to have a daughter even greater to be a father
I Read somewhere that a father said "My son is mine, till he gets a wife but my daughter is mine till the end of my life". Just like this line, you have described in this poem, a father daughter bond, a relationship as beautiful and magical as mother son bond. Also, its effect is heightened if you read this poem keeping in mind the Indian culture, where there are patriachs who cause female infoeticides and also fathers who cherish the dream of their daughter's marriage, even save for it, for day their daughters leave his house forever. Yet another masterpiece sir. Thanks for sharing it.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Penny Thank you for this. It is a different bond that holds to a fathers heart when he thinks of his.. read morePenny Thank you for this. It is a different bond that holds to a fathers heart when he thinks of his daughter. I cant quantify it I can only feel it. But I hope i manged to express it
You very well did. If you can me, someone your children's age, like this poem, you have surely done .. read moreYou very well did. If you can me, someone your children's age, like this poem, you have surely done a great job.
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