It isn't that rich people are per-say bad. Nor that poor people are good. It is the human condition that sets up society by stature. And counts wealth by monetary gain. Money is never happiness. Yet we are told all the time that it is. Look around you. See the multitudes rushing to amass their fortunes. And for what. Women who followed Gloria Steinem's ideals that you can have it all are miserable. Why? Because you can't have it all. You can't spend a life climbing the corporate ladder. Waiting to reach some plateau in your late 30s and then start a family. Children are not easy to raise. So why does money seem to make so many crazy and so many unhappy? Because money can't hold a hand. Money can't read a child's bedtime story. And money cannot make memories that last a lifetime. Shared life does that. Family does that. Descendants are the answer to selflessness. I cannot forget the look of a child's face who waited for dad to come pick him up when we were children. Only to hear again and again dad was too busy to come get him.The dreams of happiness preached on wall street are the lies that will not live forever neither will we. The smiles of children stamped in the mint of memory are the coin of the realm of happiness!
Tate
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its a beautiful poem .. love your word work Tate! its true what you say about money .. for sure .. the examples are all around us .. but being poor isnt happiness either .. by the same measure .. i think most of us just want out of the daily struggle ..weekly struggle .. and hallelujah! get on the month to month plan :) that takes the want of money (our medium of exchange) .. how we get it is the deal i think .. the pics of the horses and jockeys make me think of the recent Kentucky Derby winner it the Cal. Dreams story .. i think if your poem wasn't so universal .. you wouldn't need the note .. but i enjoyed it muchly and the song ..
E.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Gene I guess i see nobility in struggle and happiness as the reward for it
Unable to watch your video. There is a message in its place saying " video contains content from WMG", and to go to youtube to hear it.
Did enjoy your Author's note.
This would not play on WC, it said that it contained content from WMG, to watch it on youtube. I did, but that music was totally distracting from the words on the screen, and I couldn't follow it at all. Perhaps that's just me, I can't read, absorb, and listen to music with different words all at the same time. I tried to leave a comment, and it wouldn't let me, just kept refreshing the page.
Posted 10 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
HAHAok you are the first to say that to me But I think the new generations are so use to absorbing t.. read moreHAHAok you are the first to say that to me But I think the new generations are so use to absorbing the new distractions in a world where theyre always bombarded by multimedia I just happen to love the old song remembered from youth that i added to it . Thanks dave It is all a crap shoot this new medium like ebooks is a new way to use multimedia to get our work out there. Lets face it the average American has a lower tolerance for an attention span these days
10 Years Ago
You must use microsofts browser they are notorious for restricting content
Human condition and human nature...nothing wrong with money, we work hard all our lives and strive for a better life, as long as it doesn't take away from reality...the music is perfect!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I loved the music it is my friend Georges favorite song He was from a family of 17 children born in .. read moreI loved the music it is my friend Georges favorite song He was from a family of 17 children born in the depression
OMG 17, that is unfathomable in this day and age, and we have so much more. Not to mention, I have a.. read moreOMG 17, that is unfathomable in this day and age, and we have so much more. Not to mention, I have a headache just thinking of bedtime.
10 Years Ago
night Mary Ellen night John Boy LOl and on and on lol
10 Years Ago
Ha the thought makes me twitch...I thought 3 was a lot!
...money buys away attention to things that will never last, happiness that will never stay forever... man made money, money made man mad...the song, the poem...everything just seems beautiful...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
thank you Yes money will never hold a hand or tuck a child into bed thank you
Good music and amazing words. Thank you. Your words are true. A man who worked hard for his needs. He appreciate them. Thank you my friend for the music and good words.
Coyote
You're very welcome, though the truth hardly requires thanks.
10 Years Ago
you are too kind
10 Years Ago
kindness and truth go hand-in-hand. I've always believed that the greatest kindness IS the truth, wh.. read morekindness and truth go hand-in-hand. I've always believed that the greatest kindness IS the truth, which is what I always give in my reviews.
Hi Tate,
Love your videos. I think telling stories that have a moral to them is thought of as a thing of the past. Children no longer read Aesops fables for example, as we did as children learning the differences of right and wrong, misery and wealth, good and bad, kindness and self indulgence.
Maybe it's time we brought some of these things back to our schools and maybe just maybe the world would start to be a better place.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Sir I am trying to invent new ways of viewing our works
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