I often think of my own end. It is hard not to feel the hand of time on me. Life has a way of wearing us down. I have outlived my own predictions by many a year. I once thought I would surely meet the end by the time I was thirty. I shall have to console myself with the thought that I might just live to be old lol.
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to wake to face another day" This is genious as is the rest of this piece, Always a joy to reada your work but to see it fro a lightly darker perspective than you usualy write is incredible. Been wonderin how your poetry would read with a darker tone to it, now I know that it reads with an ominious note yes but still your positive message remains. It's like a stor cloud with a silver lining, only it's a silver cloud with a grey shadow. Just awesome my friend...
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Yes that is true. What is sad for me is in the loss of my own dreams are all part of the plan of lif.. read moreYes that is true. What is sad for me is in the loss of my own dreams are all part of the plan of life. It is the child who matters not me. And in him I find my own purpose. If i can give him a boost on his own dreams Looking past my own we both win. In his joy and happiness is my own. Thank you.
10 Years Ago
Yes you are only one of two you and Deron Alexis Are the only two to grasp the depth of this poem. P.. read moreYes you are only one of two you and Deron Alexis Are the only two to grasp the depth of this poem. Perhaps because you have a new child.One day this will be your truth too.
Death is coming for us all...every one. Blessed is the one who knows that time is short and tries to maker the best of it and themselves. Nicely wrought, Tate.
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
Many thanks Fabian. I tie my son to the past going back to antiquity. He takes me into the future gr.. read moreMany thanks Fabian. I tie my son to the past going back to antiquity. He takes me into the future granting me an immortality. I don’t know if that’s what God intended.? But when I wrote my books, I thought to myself the point of this is that my great grandchildren might one day take the books down and read them and see from what and tribulations they were created I hoped by telling them where they came from it would ease the journey of where they’re going.
2 Months Ago
You are wise, brother Tate. We only have this little time. We have to help each other along the jour.. read moreYou are wise, brother Tate. We only have this little time. We have to help each other along the journey and especially, our children so we might have hope for a better, brighter future, not only for ourselves but for all.
WOW..Powerful ..I can relate.... as years pass I retain half of me ..
I never partied ..except with my husband ... A dear sweet man , that never left me lonely ..
Take Care... These are the days that try our spirit...
The impact that a child can have on the view of our past and the road of their future causes us to evaluate our choice both then and now. Hopefully we summon the strength and determination to fight on. " Before my body I throw my warlike shield..." Shakespeare - Yours is a very nice piece of work and encouragement to us all.
- carl
Carl The birth of my son changed my life forever. The first time I ever loved someone else more than.. read moreCarl The birth of my son changed my life forever. The first time I ever loved someone else more than me from then on everything I did I thought twice about and feared that I might cast a shadow over him. I’m very careful what I do and what I don’t do now and I thank him for that.
2 Months Ago
you are to be applauded for that dedication to your child's well being. This is exactly what it shou.. read moreyou are to be applauded for that dedication to your child's well being. This is exactly what it should mean to be a parent. carl
2 Months Ago
Being a parent doesn’t stop at 18. Being a man doesn’t stop at 20 being a man has always met con.. read moreBeing a parent doesn’t stop at 18. Being a man doesn’t stop at 20 being a man has always met considering myself last care for everyone but yourself because you were born a man with the strength that half the population doesn’t possess. You do your best to help others, the value of a man lies not in what he owns, but what he gives to others
Time moves on, sometimes too quickly, then we realize where we are in our destiny; often dreams are far better than reality and until they get taken from us, we long for them to return…..now we face the real life what we’ve been handed and we have to handle it our own ways…. Lovely
Warmly
B.🌷
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
Thank you, Betty. If only we got to go through this whole thing twice, it would make it so much easi.. read moreThank you, Betty. If only we got to go through this whole thing twice, it would make it so much easier if we didn’t have to learn along the way
Rage against the dying emergency room light was my motto too! perhaps that’s why we did pass 35 we didn’t care! Now I’m 50 and things are getting creaky but my mind is ticking a crescendo and I’m changing my disposition on this position and becoming possessed for more compositions! Your rhyme rhythm is impeccable in this and your expression is so true and lovely
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thank you Robert I thought sure I would burn out and die by the age of 30 I never thought that I wou.. read moreThank you Robert I thought sure I would burn out and die by the age of 30 I never thought that I would live to old age. Now I have to content myself with the thought that I’ve outlived my dreams
Time passes too quickly. Before you know it youth has gone and along with it dreams not fulfilled. Children can focus the mind. All decent people want the best for their children and grandchildren. My priorities have changed. Family come first. A pleasure to read poetry so perfectly rhymed and metered Tate. Happy New Year to you and yours.
Hi Christine How are you? Thank you for reviewing this meandering thought of mine. I guess I am old .. read moreHi Christine How are you? Thank you for reviewing this meandering thought of mine. I guess I am old enough now to realize that I am not what matters. My children and grandchildren are what matters now
5 Years Ago
I am well Tate thank you. Hope all is good with you? You share the same conclusion as I've arrived a.. read moreI am well Tate thank you. Hope all is good with you? You share the same conclusion as I've arrived at. Children and grandchildren matter most now. They take up much of my time and thoughts.
5 Years Ago
I agree as we age most learn the difference between Selfish and selfless. Coming to the inevitable c.. read moreI agree as we age most learn the difference between Selfish and selfless. Coming to the inevitable conclusion that they are not the end all but the beginning.
I feel like we all have these thoughts at times. I have thoughts all the time about how much time has been wasted on things like brushing your teeth or eating when it could be spent with loved ones, but everything happens for a reason
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